Reviews for Midday Sun
twinesstar chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
i really like this story and i do think you should continue it,

i also wanted to point out that renesmee is spelled like this with to E's at the end. and i dont think bella would be that over protective of nessie. but other than that its really a great story line.
greenlight.01 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
i loved the start, really well written. please update soon!
freyjaee chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
iri-skywalker chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
GREAT start! give us more?
einstinette chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I like it. I think you should go into detqil of her first day of school. Maybe have her be teased and then have her mother or father come to the school to take care of it.
DanielWhite chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Excellent so far
Maiden Muse chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Good. Need to work on your summary though.

Keep Writing!

Mysterious Maiden.x