Reviews for Death's Visage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn Alucard acts like a pedophile in this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to when Harry finally gains enough confidence to wind up blowing up on Dumbledore, the more public the better. I'm also looking forward to reading what the goblins do to the Dursleys. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still very curious to find out who the black snake animgus from the beginning is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, i don't think that any of Harry's now guardians will be willing to let him go |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im somewhat dissapointed this fic seems to be abandoned as it was really nice to read. Your alucard was great, being a good mix of nurturing and terrifying, not many of the authors i have read so far do that. They always either make him an a sad sack that just needs love, or a blender |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and I really like it. Hope you continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() re-reading this..inwonder what will happen when helsing finds out dumbledore is trying to meddle with her heir..would love to see severus be allies with the helsings to help with harry..i wonder what did lily do actually before she died that made dumbledore mad? anyway keep up the good work..update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() would love for you to finish the story its amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an extremely well-written story that shows a lot of potential in both where it's going and your writing talent in general. The emotional descriptions are a pleasure to read and really reveal each character as an individual. It's an incredibly slow burn which is a huge shame since it's not been updated in a long time. However, the biggest issue is the 180 turn on Harry's personality between able to poison the Dursleys to speaking with the Goblins and finally joining Hellsing. Essentially, the boy in Hellsing is nothing like the one who poisoned the Dursleys and spoke to the goblins. Now, while I understand the new environment and people situation, I've skimmed ahead and found that the "mouse" persona continues right into Hogwarts. The problem here is that the story begins with an ACTIVE Harry taking his life in his own hands, willing to do what he must to survive, and having his powers, only to turn into one about a PASSIVE Harry who allows everything to happen to him. Two completely different characters. Sadly I was hoping to read about the first (especially considering the story's description) only to be given a bait-and-switch with the second. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is quite enjoyable; it seems to have been just beginning to get in to its stride when it went on hiatus, which is a shame. Still; im putting it on alert, just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon please would like to read more thank you for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you will ever see this but eve tho I just wanted to say that I liked the story a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can u plz update when u can |