|Reviews for Incandescence|
| Ninjasnowflake chapter 12 . 5/12
I read this story in a heartbeat until i came to hapter 10 i think that chapter took me a week to get around, simply because the situation was too much- lol
I think the last chapter kinda ruined things for me- i mean it did close up the stoey nicely, but on the other hand it also seemed kinda rushed to tell the point of the story ans yeah that was sad- also i feel like Draco should have been more against writing about himself than he was- simply cuz that was the feeling i got of his character. He was stubborn about writing about Harry so he should have been the same about writing about himself, especially cuz he didnt see himself as a hero and heroes was what he wrote about-
But else the rest of the chapters were really well plotted and written and i liked them a lot! Even chapter 10 when i got around it-
Thw thing about harry moving in the world of death seems a bit unrealistic to me tbh- i mwan i get if he could move from graveyard to graveyard, but to two living ppl- that seems odd- ouo
Anyways good work!
| MissMJS chapter 12 . 1/27
Ohhhhhhh, ending with the title! Heh, always appreciate those kinds of stories ;)
| quin3218 chapter 12 . 11/10/2016
| ADotHamburr chapter 12 . 9/6/2016
I love the way you portrayed Draco in this! I can totally imagine him being a writer, to be honest. I thought that overall, it was really creative and I quite enjoyed reading this.
| babyvfan chapter 12 . 7/24/2016
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I loved it. I did. I seriously did. I loved it.
| babyvfan chapter 11 . 7/24/2016
This was just beautiful, although my poor heart is breaking that Harry got rejected because of his gifts
| babyvfan chapter 10 . 7/24/2016
Hot damn. I didn't see any if that coming. Yolanda's reasons for targeting Harry, the way she tortured Draco, and Harry's special ability for calling the dead. It remained me of the corpse bride where all the spirits gang up on the former fiancé who killed her
| babyvfan chapter 9 . 7/24/2016
So help god, this girl is like Luna and Bellatrix combined. She could be their love child or something
| babyvfan chapter 8 . 7/24/2016
I'm loving this. Progress is being made and I love it so much
| babyvfan chapter 7 . 7/24/2016
Holy hell. This story gets more and more interesting with each chapter
| babyvfan chapter 6 . 7/24/2016
Holy hell. I'm with Harry: Draco is brave but also stupid. Then again Harry can't judge too harshly since he did plenty of things that fueled by that combination
| babyvfan chapter 5 . 7/24/2016
I will like to say the moment to say I love love loooooove you so much for bringing Luna into this chapter. I love the precious darling and whenever she's featured in a chapter/ story, I'm happy. With that being said, smart choice. If there's anyone who can make Draco understand Harry and plant some seeds of ideas into his head, it's her. She has a way of saying plenty with only a handful or less of words
| babyvfan chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
Oh dear lord. Draco is like a dog with a book. He won't stop till he gets his story. Have to say, I admire his commitment and dedication. Proves how much he loves writing
| babyvfan chapter 3 . 7/24/2016
First off I must give it up to mama Malfoy. Say what you will about the wean, but she is FIRECE. And what I love is that she's on Harry's side. She understands why he wouldn't want to give his story. Why some things are just better off left alone. It really annoys me that Draco who went through his own horrors and scandal can't understand that.
Second, I applaud Hermione for having her best friend's back and dismissing Draco. However the info Draco said about her character-based book makes me wonder if she and Ron are together.
Third, shame on Draco for sneaking into Harry's office and trying to invade his privacy. If Harry didn't distrust him before, he definitely does now.
| babyvfan chapter 2 . 7/24/2016
Dear god, this chapter is just as good as the first one. Even more so since it was amusing seeing the way Draco's writer mind worked.