|Reviews for Tiny Dancer|
| vanessahalad297 chapter 19 . 8/31
Update please and continue
| Mirage chapter 19 . 3/15/2016
sounds like a good Story, some sad parts some funny some loving, its really nice
also the Pairing are interesting...but im unsure about Zack...he like Tifa or Aerith but is also partly together with Angael...who is he with...a threesome or foursome...
would be interesting where this goes, will Sephiroth open up more, how fast will get Cloud to his right weight...how will the dancing be...again pro or only for fun at some Shows...what i think would be the best...some Training now and then and now and then a role to dance
will they start to have such friendly meatings with the other soldiers of zack friend from now on together with the other three...
and what about Genesis and Barret...will hey have lots of Dates -like more month -bevor they can say they are together or will they stay like this...
when will Vincent Show up...
does Cloud still get Money from this bitches who did try to enslave him for Money and working as dancer...i mean they should pay...they deserve any Money lost to him
will he stay living with the guys...
how is Tiffas new condo?
i reallly lie how peaceful this is, and that Hojo is gone...no going crazy or war, no killing of loved ones, no fighter Cloud...
its nice like this...and they have enough Problems...cloud needing to learn reading writing and such and Sephiroth to get more Backbone while in a relationship he is powerhouse but accts a touch to submissive
and poor Zack Needs to find out if he like Tiffa or Aerith together with him and Angael
and Genseis...poor guy but he is on the right way already
Hope you come back one day to write more chapters and an end to this story
| alyabunny chapter 9 . 3/10/2016
I am actually rereading this for the umpteenth time and would just like to drop a comment saying how much I absolutely LOVE it!
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/8/2013
Please come baaaaaaaaaack! Love this and want to read more )
| Alice Hell chapter 19 . 11/5/2012
This is so amazing. I hope you one day update.
| TA Salmalin chapter 19 . 6/10/2012
Cloud is such a wreck in this story, I'm riveted watching him and everyone else trying to help him recover. Great story!
| Dragonanzar chapter 19 . 5/3/2012
Great story. I like they way you're sensitively handling the non-eating issue. Sephiroth is really cute. So's Cloud. Zack is seriously perverted (that goes without saying), but it is quite endearing, particularly as he doesn't argue the point.
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 19 . 2/11/2012
oh i simply love this story so far i cant wait to read more
| carbonitedoubleohneg chapter 19 . 7/21/2011
Awww! Is there more to this story? I desperately hope that there is :3 You are such a good writer of this adorable fluff, and you put enough plot into it to make it a legit story :) Keep up the good work
| To lazy to login chapter 19 . 5/8/2011
"Did you just see what she did? Isn't she sooo hot? Oh my god I think I might just spontaneously orgasm."
Holy shit, I swear i giggled through this whole story.
| kimberly kim chapter 19 . 4/21/2011
Omggggg please update soon I read the whole thing in like a freaking hour. Hahahahaha I would live you foreverrrr if you update :))))
| Chocobo Knights chapter 19 . 2/2/2011
waaahhh~ this is sooooooo cuttteeeeeeee~
so AU, but this so cute! so fucking cute! XDDDD
Sephiroth and Cloud is both so fucking adorable! XDDDD
man how much i love this story!
poor Cloud, but Sephiroth and the others will be there for him
Go for it Cloud, your knight in shining armor will always be there for you when you need him
*cough* anyway... this story is great and you're amazing
| Illulian chapter 14 . 9/9/2010
oh my, I'm really liking this story! This chapter was good too, but the nagging part of my conscience won't give me peace and I have to point out two things that I think were overkill. Please take this as constructive criticism, I'm not aiming to offend, just to help. I really think you have a great story, but there are just certain misunderstandings that drag it down a bit.
Firstly, I wish to address the difference between psychiatry and psychology as when I first read "Perhaps…a psychiatrist?" I was like, whoa, where did that come from? He doesn't need a psychiatrist, at worst of maybe a psychologist, maybe. But psychiatrist? eh, I think it's too extreme. Psychiatrists are medical doctors that are specifically devoted to the study and treatment of mental disorders. They go to medical school and get an M.D or a D.O. and because of that, they can prescribe medication. Yes pysychiatrists do assit those coping with with anorexia, but the symptoms you are discribing seem to fit more with a nearly serious case of malnutrion, dehydration mostly.
In contrast a psychologist is someone who has studied human or animal mental functions and behaviors, and did not go to medical school and therefore cannot prescribe medicine. They focus extensively on psychotherapy and treating emotional and mental suffering in patients with behavioral intervention. Something which I think would benefit Cloud more in his situation than medication. I think it would also make more sense, that Zack he have a Masters in Psychology instead of a "doctorate in psyciayatry" given his reasons.
Secondly, I'd like to point out the lack of or confused symptoms of starvation, anorexia and dehyration in your fic. I must admit that I found the jump from not eating for two days (maybe over a period) to suffering from starvation, to sound quite silly. It's bizzare to someone who's seen it all first hand. It just makes the story look like a hopeless perpertrator of deus ex machina. I don't think thats what you intended, I just think the terms are not understood, which is fine as starvation is not a common medical condition in first world countries.
As such, I'm probably only going to be one of a few to pick up on all this. I just thought I'd mention it as, well, my conscience was nagging me too. I hope you don't hate me after reading this. I really do like your fic.
| Illulian chapter 9 . 9/9/2010
Lmao, Sephiroth for the win! It's good to see things go right for a change.
| Illulian chapter 3 . 9/8/2010
lol. I love the character interaction, Zack and Genesis make me laugh. Also this fic has such an original idea. Despite it being an AU it really works with the character's dispositions. Awesome choice for Aeris as a medic and Tifa as a choreographer, it makes a complete sense. Yup, I have to say I'm definitely loving this fic so far!
*clicks next chap* _