Reviews for A Camelia For a Pretty Girl
shadowbear chapter 8 . 3/10/2011
I agree, it was a bit cheesy. I still think it was sweet though. However, I was expecting a more sarcastic proposal and an even more sarcastic response from Temari. Kinda like:

Shika: "Baka, this is so troublesome. Will you marry me you irritating woman?"

Temari: "Sorry, I don't marry crybabies."

Shika: *sighs*

Temari: *gins and kisses Shika* "But I don't see a cry baby proposing to me." *wink*

etc, etc, etc, blah, blah, blah. end review.
Blopid chapter 8 . 3/10/2011
Cheesy much. Tone it.

But it's wonderful outside of cheesiness. Sometimes cheesiness is required for a paring :3
0.o chapter 8 . 3/10/2011
paul chapter 8 . 3/9/2011
wow such a nice story so far cant wait for more
JSheiress chapter 7 . 1/10/2011
I like this. You should continue. I kind of like longer stories more cause I feel like to the point ones are kinda written forced, I guess. (unless they're oneshot!) Idk, my opinion! :) anyways, can't wait till u update!
FaktCheker chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
Shitaki like mushroom?
Sasori's-girl99 chapter 7 . 2/6/2010
I love it! I can't wait til the next chapter
Emerald Gaze chapter 7 . 1/23/2010
..really, she has no right to him a cry baby anymore

(after crying just cuz of that dream of hers)

...and all of a sudden she turns so abusive, and it actually hurt to hear her insult shika ot his kage like that

it made no sence that she wouldn't want tsunade to know, after all shika was proud to show that she was his

Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
wahahahaha...that was so un-neji like!

he definitly is hangin out too much with lee and gai!_!
3Cheersfor5Years chapter 7 . 1/15/2010
more plz! XD plz plz plz i love it lol
bittersweet-temari chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
a~ah cheesy! XD kya~ fangirl mode! so sweet heheheh! i want some more!
bittersweet-temari chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
hey! good introduction! i'm so looking forward for the next chapters! hehehe i like the part when she said she's the kazekage's sister hehehe i could imagine how she looks like
shadowbear chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
I want more! Update soon! You have too much talent to let thhis story go to waste!
C.Carmo chapter 6 . 9/2/2009
Hey hey! So, I just read your Fanfic and I have to say, I LOVE it! But I'm wondering when will you post more chapters :( Please! I really wanna know what's gonna happen in the next chapters... If you need help with something just ask! hehe

Willow chapter 6 . 7/13/2009
This story is just too cute for words. Shikamaru and Temari are my favorite couple, so I'm really enjoying it! Can't wait for an update.
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