You are brilliant in your portrayal of Spock. In all the corners of his thoughts and actions never cease to amuse me in how so well descriptive you have made him in this. And I like your logic in making Kirk; the guy who made Uhura-Spock possible. Lovely story and very reasonable 'how they got together'.

I was SO READY to take up my pitch fork! But you were very sneaky and clever. This was all very circuitous and I can say that I've been had.

The line about forbidding? So sexy. I nearly died.

That metaphor at the end was pretty cute.

I've seem to have developed my own cold, so I figured I would read this.

It's offering me a certain sense of solidarity though I could go for my own Spock! I'm looking forward to reading healthy!Nyota as you've done a fabulous job altering her characterization in deference to her illness. Spock is quite particular and wonderfully out of touch. The fact that he feels like he's taking advantage of Nyota instead caring about her because she's sick is too adorable.

The one thing I did notice was you wrote "oral sensitivity" instead of "aural sensitivity." I can't image that statement every passing for polite conversation. :D

Wonder what Spock would think of Bach? Toccata & Fugue in D Minor perhaps?

This is very interesting! I really like it so far!

I'm happy to tell you that I've read this story over and over. This is most likely my favorite Star Trek fanfiction of all time! Spock is so like his real character!

I just found this wonderful little story. It was delicious! I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue sharing your gift of writing to the world.

very interesting, Spock's thoughts are very on point.

The only thing that threw me is Uhura's blushing. I've never seen someone her complexion blush. I can understand her getting red from fever/cold but not actually blushing. (I'm saying this as someone with about the same complexion and same undertones as Zoe)

Quite good in its entirety; I enjoyed it throughout. The characterizations were well-done, the scenarios were good and well-paced, and the romance seemed rather realistic, as opposed to...some things I have read. It was sweet and enjoyable to read, but everything about it seemed more-or-less fairly plausible. Nicely done.

The two sickies take to the bed for rest,that's a twist. I have thoroughly enjoyed this ever logical Spock and this grounded, logical Nyota. Thank you for a good read.

I adore your story- you characterized Spock's character perfectly and I loved every second of it. Great job! :)

Re-reading your story - that rarely happens. You go, girl!

"He was playing the harp portion of the second movement of Mozart's concerto for harp and flute. Without the flute, the notes of the lute seemed to echo sadly, incomplete without their appropriate accompaniment."

The perfect balance of his character and what we need from him as the desiring readers. Fantastic. You are favourited, my friend. Writing like yours is nearly impossible to find. You're the pearl in 1 in a million clams.

I'll be reading everything you have. Please consider a higher rating sometime.

Absolutely brilliant.

You have an exceptional gift painting with words!

Your characterizations are spot on!