Reviews for Keep Our Love A Secret
peddie-obsessed1.0 chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Love the alternate ending!
account-is-terminated1221 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
WOW, that was adorable! A shy Raito is an adorable Raito. X) I also thought that L's little blushes here and there (that went unnoticed by Raito, to my dismay at first...) were kawaii!

Another thing; I seriously wasn't expecting the little Matsuda-set-them-up twist! Great job writing, too. (: You had a nice flow, I only found literally one error (you wrote 'and' instead of 'hand'), and you kept L & Light pretty in character (well, as in character as you can be when it comes to yaoi fluff ). This is definitely going on my favorites list! :D
iRideSaix chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Wooww... This is adorable! I don't even review very often even though I read a ton of fics, but this... This deserves the review, yeah? Heehee so cute! I think you got Matsuda's character down-packed, you know, with the cute fail-ness and stuff. Ah, I'm rambling now. Anyway, this was adorable and really awesome! Keep writing! D
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
...ahhhh! so cute! wtg matsuda! lol
HanaNaruLight chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Purrrrrrr…

More lxlight please,swetieeeeee!:-)
HanaNaruLight chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Purrrrrrr…

More lxlight please,swetieeeeee!:-)
Mary Lou chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I really enjoyed this. Hooray for Matsuda! He isn't so dumb after all! I loved the sweetness between Light and L, and I also liked your alternate ending.
iFluffRaver chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
"I want him to know I like melon bread." AHAHAHAHAA! I love this story! I love all your LXRaito kawaii stories!

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chishiki chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
They got togheter because of Matsuda's diary or I freaked out in the middle of the reading or something? WHO, that was so... Cool. I've never seen anything like this before. I mean, Death Note fantom, but... Whatever.

I just want you to know; in the ending I imagined Matsuda with crazy eyes saying repeatedly: "JUST LIKE I PLANNED, MUA HA HA". IT'S ALL DEATH NOTE CRAZYNESS INFLUENCING MY MIND OK

By the way, I liked the first ending the most. :D

Your fiction is awesome. Kiss.
I Am Light chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
you are kinda corny, but in a totally sweet way. I love this fic!
Cherrytoast chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Corny, maybe, but great too! I'd like to read more of his diary, too! :)
devils address chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
i loved it

it was awesome and romantic
Deviously Ruined Rose chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
yay! GO MATSUDA! XD
SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
XD LOVE THE ALTERNATE ENDING! XD LAUGHED MY SOCKS OFF...XD

THIS WAS GREAT! MADE MY NIGHT!
Ilandere Okami chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
No matter the corniness, Matsuda is a genius in his own way!

And the alternate ending is hilarious!

SQUEE! I luv all ur LxLight stories. They're always so sweet and funny and cute...and kissy...teehee

Keep on writing!

Luvs ya,

Zena
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