Reviews for It will be
Danni chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Oh my gosh! You definitely did NOT ruin it! This is amazing! I love it!
helloclaude chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I liked this, but one thing that I thought could be better was Vanessa's mode of transportation. She seems like the type who would have to take the subway for financial reasons and for conveniency. She could have gotten one of the taxi drivers from Rosario's to give her half off or something, but I just don't see her taking a taxi.

Other than that, it was good. Short, but good.
Kai chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I like it but I think you need to write more *hint hint*

please don't make this into a one shot, a full Vanessa/Usnavi story would be nice!
fires have fly-ed chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
You say you're a newcomer, so I'll give you the (cold hard) truth: Hon, it was too short. It was probably something you tried to perfect, and yes, it is well-written, but it isn't enough. Though I do love the song reference when she speaks...haha.