Reviews for Unknown
jade chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
i like your story.
hgf5 chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
good
Mionicale chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
I love ur story personally so dont be offended when i ssay this...i only mean it as constructive critiscism... while ur writing is good i have seen many a story that go into too much detail (such ur description of a characters clothes) that make the story lose focus thus taking away from ur awesome writing skills..in reality it does not matter what they r really wearing unless truly vital to a story...but i wud luv 4 u to continue cuz i luv this story...thank u 4 ur time

Sincerely,

Mionicale XD
AniHitachiinLover chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
aaaaahhhhh it was good haha i wonder what souta was going to say haha please update sooon \./

-AniHitachiinLover
Ravenclaw's Kitten chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
This is really good. I like it and hopw to see more out soon! I have two suggestions for who Souta whouls be paired with, if you aren't opposed to writing yaoi. Either Shippo, or Inuyasha. Either would be pretty cool.

Much love and thanks

~Kiza
Queen Baka chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Update! Or there will be flames! Jk but plz update soon
RebornRose1992 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
.great job. not sure about souta.
Serenity Dinago chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
lol more please
takengoddess chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
awesome
Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I love it
Science Queen chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I like this story.I think souta should be paired with rin.(they would make a cute couple)