Reviews for Unknown
jade chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
i like your story.
hgf5 chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
Mionicale chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
I love ur story personally so dont be offended when i ssay this...i only mean it as constructive critiscism... while ur writing is good i have seen many a story that go into too much detail (such ur description of a characters clothes) that make the story lose focus thus taking away from ur awesome writing reality it does not matter what they r really wearing unless truly vital to a story...but i wud luv 4 u to continue cuz i luv this story...thank u 4 ur time


Mionicale XD
AniHitachiinLover chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
aaaaahhhhh it was good haha i wonder what souta was going to say haha please update sooon \./

Ravenclaw's Kitten chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
This is really good. I like it and hopw to see more out soon! I have two suggestions for who Souta whouls be paired with, if you aren't opposed to writing yaoi. Either Shippo, or Inuyasha. Either would be pretty cool.

Much love and thanks

Queen Baka chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Update! Or there will be flames! Jk but plz update soon
RebornRose1992 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
.great job. not sure about souta.
Serenity Dinago chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
lol more please
takengoddess chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I love it
Science Queen chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I like this story.I think souta should be paired with rin.(they would make a cute couple)