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![]() ![]() i like your story. |
![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() I love ur story personally so dont be offended when i ssay this...i only mean it as constructive critiscism... while ur writing is good i have seen many a story that go into too much detail (such ur description of a characters clothes) that make the story lose focus thus taking away from ur awesome writing skills..in reality it does not matter what they r really wearing unless truly vital to a story...but i wud luv 4 u to continue cuz i luv this story...thank u 4 ur time Sincerely, Mionicale XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaaahhhhh it was good haha i wonder what souta was going to say haha please update sooon \./ -AniHitachiinLover |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I like it and hopw to see more out soon! I have two suggestions for who Souta whouls be paired with, if you aren't opposed to writing yaoi. Either Shippo, or Inuyasha. Either would be pretty cool. Much love and thanks ~Kiza |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! Or there will be flames! Jk but plz update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() .great job. not sure about souta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story.I think souta should be paired with rin.(they would make a cute couple) |