Reviews for Brilliant
charapa chapter 1 . 4/18
This is probably the most fascinating AU that almost was :D
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
sorry, but eugh! i liked the power bits, and dumbledore being so oblivious is hard to believe, but some of the parts were - absolutely disgusting. blech! What on Earth possessed you?
dancesontrains chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I'm thankful you posted what you already had! It was excellent.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
You should defiantly continue! This story is so original!
-The Elder Wand Blog
Bakenko chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
I love all your work ( I am a Voldemort hp reader!) - Its intelligent, articulate and very original. Your characters, in particular Tom/Voldemort are expertly observed. I noticed this story doesn't look like its going to receive further update but I really hope it does!
Ahalteke chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Ahhhh I know this is old but please finish it!
Krysania chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I will admit that I started this out of sick curiosity the same reason that I read my first snarry seven years ago... I doupt that I will start shiping this pairing but I would lie if I said I wasn't completely blown at the brilliand writing and how much sense it makes...

Totaly impresed...

ReclaimMyPlace chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This is really good. please keep writing! Update update update noooow! :D
musme chapter 1 . 8/15/2011

I'm french, so I hope I don't write too mistakes...

your fic is interresting.

but your characters are too unstable.

tom is good? bad? could be safe? and what does he want?

and albus? could be love enough tom to help him?

in general grey characters are good. because life isn't black or white, and that bring deepness to their personality.

but, at the begining, you need build a strong fic. you show your characters, and we discover them. if they are caricaturals, it is not a problem: they can will get deepness after.

despite, I love it
Catatonic Muse chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Another completely AWESOME fic! Lovely, lovely job with characterizing Tom and Albus. Oh, so wonderful!

I always thought they knew each other a bit too well for a normal student/teacher relationship...

Wonderful job, indeed.
Inkfire chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
I really liked this story. The use of the quotes was flawless, and you built this unlikely relationship beautifully. I especially loved Tom's POV... Great job!
Ellen chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Don't you dare abandoning this story! It's absolutely awesome and I want to read much, much more! I would be so delighted if you found inspiration to continue for this is already one of the best and believable Tom/Dumbledore stories ever, and I love this pairing very much and have read quite some already.

Please stop our suffering
rrxr chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
It's such a pity you ran out of inspiration, this is so interesting and well-written!
darkxangelx-xo chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
oh I love it , maybe have something bad happen to tom and albus get all protective?
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Excellent beginning! This could have happened this way, and it would explain a lot (and it would also explain why Dumbledore appeared to turn a blind eye to what the Marauders did to Snape-another poor halfblood interested in the Dark Arts _must_ be dangerous, right?).

Very well done, please continue. And what happens if Tom himself begins to feel actual love for Albus?
20 | Page 1 2 Next »