Reviews for Breathless
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Looked like a weird combination of monty python, old fashioned BDSM, and a good deal of cosmic joke.
Fangking2 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
what...the...fuck?
Techpriest of Tzeentch chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
well...hmm...
Ragnarok chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
What is this I don't even...?

Oookay...
GreyWarden2009 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
F $#ing hillarious!
The Hendog chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
...

My avatar says it all. WTF?

Later(unlikely, but you never know)

-The Hendog
theprincedonte chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Honestly when i read it the first thought i had was WTF but when i got to the part about "selling us out to the dark side" i was just laughing manically. All in all good story keep it up.
Cizzymac chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
So I was sitting here reading a perfectly normal story (so I thought), then things go south in a REAL BIG hurry...I couldn't help but think:

"I'm 12 years old and what is this?"
anon chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Very nicely done. Kudos!
Obiki Doragon chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
And there it goes over my head.

It'd be funnier if it was one of Keitaro's friends.
Tyr'll chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
It made me chuckle. Good Job and thanks for the story.
SlippyTheWeasel chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Why you chose Love Hina for this is totally beyond me. Except for the names and location, they are nothing like the characters from Love Hina.

And as for gallows humor, you need to work on it. I couldn't see the humor through the idiocy.
chance10 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
hilarious...more more more
HarimaHige chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this was realy funny.
glAssbOy chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
The hell?

In any case, a good read for a few laughs. Although what came out of me was more of a disturbed chuckle. Judging from the range of genres you've worked on, I must really say you're a very flexible writer.

On the David Carradine angle, I didn't notice it a first until you mentioned it on your notes. Come to think of it, his passing was a pretty weird one too.

Cheers!
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