| Reviews for Breathless |
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  Meh chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 I thought I'd clicked wrong and was reading something by Lord Raa for a minute there... |
 Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 Looked like a weird combination of monty python, old fashioned BDSM, and a good deal of cosmic joke. |
| Fangking2 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 what...the...fuck? |
| Techpriest of Tzeentch chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 well...hmm... |
| Ragnarok chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 What is this I don't even...? Oookay... |
| GreyWarden2009 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 F $#ing hillarious! |
| The Hendog chapter 1 . 9/23/2010 ... My avatar says it all. WTF? Later(unlikely, but you never know) -The Hendog |
| theprincedonte chapter 1 . 8/14/2010 Honestly when i read it the first thought i had was WTF but when i got to the part about "selling us out to the dark side" i was just laughing manically. All in all good story keep it up. |
| Cizzymac chapter 1 . 7/20/2009 So I was sitting here reading a perfectly normal story (so I thought), then things go south in a REAL BIG hurry...I couldn't help but think: "I'm 12 years old and what is this?" |
| anon chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 Very nicely done. Kudos! |
| Obiki Doragon chapter 1 . 6/14/2009 And there it goes over my head. It'd be funnier if it was one of Keitaro's friends. |
| Tyr'll chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 It made me chuckle. Good Job and thanks for the story. |
| SlippyTheWeasel chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 Why you chose Love Hina for this is totally beyond me. Except for the names and location, they are nothing like the characters from Love Hina. And as for gallows humor, you need to work on it. I couldn't see the humor through the idiocy. |
| chance10 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 hilarious...more more more |
| HarimaHige chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 this was realy funny. |