Reviews for Breathless |
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![]() ![]() I thought I'd clicked wrong and was reading something by Lord Raa for a minute there... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looked like a weird combination of monty python, old fashioned BDSM, and a good deal of cosmic joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what...the...fuck? |
![]() ![]() ![]() well...hmm... |
![]() ![]() What is this I don't even...? Oookay... |
![]() ![]() ![]() F $#ing hillarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... My avatar says it all. WTF? Later(unlikely, but you never know) -The Hendog |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly when i read it the first thought i had was WTF but when i got to the part about "selling us out to the dark side" i was just laughing manically. All in all good story keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I was sitting here reading a perfectly normal story (so I thought), then things go south in a REAL BIG hurry...I couldn't help but think: "I'm 12 years old and what is this?" |
![]() ![]() Very nicely done. Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And there it goes over my head. It'd be funnier if it was one of Keitaro's friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It made me chuckle. Good Job and thanks for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why you chose Love Hina for this is totally beyond me. Except for the names and location, they are nothing like the characters from Love Hina. And as for gallows humor, you need to work on it. I couldn't see the humor through the idiocy. |
![]() ![]() hilarious...more more more |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was realy funny. |