|Reviews for Kingdom Hearts In France|
| A Mare Undercover chapter 51 . 9/23/2013
Oh my god! I'm dying of laughter at the bits with Baby Sora swearing and speaking French! I just want to type up the whole part now!
"AWW! SO FREAKING CUTE!" Marluxia shouts. He steps closer to the baby. Sora smiles.
"Homo!" He tells Marluxia. Everyone's quiet.
"Did he just call you gay?" Roxas snickers. Axel steps up.
"What am I?" He asks Sora. Sora thinks for a minute.
"Usted eres una asquerosa puta!" He declares. Axel's jaw drops.
"WHOA! When the hell did he learn Spanish?!" He shouts.
"Spanish?" Roxas asks. Axel nods.
"Sora just called me a whore!" The group is silent. Marluxia starts to giggle.
"Axel's a whore!" howls Luxord. He falls down, crying with laughter. Roxas steps up.
"What am I?" He glares at Sora. Sora thinks for a minute.
"... DADDY!" Sora jumps from Xion's arms onto Roxas. Xion gets jealous.
"What am I then?" She asks. Sora smiles.
"Vous êtes jolis!" He declares. Xion giggles.
"Even as a baby, Sora has good taste!" she says.
"What the fuck? Sora's a lot smarter now! What the hell happened?" Axel says. Sora waves a hand.
"Coconut!" Sora says and makes a falling motion. He taps his head and pretends to go limp. Frank figures out what Sora's trying to say.
"I think Sora means when he was little, a coconut fell on him." Axel slaps himself.
"So THAT'S why Roxas is smarter than Sora! He got the part from when Sora was smart!" Axel figures out. Sora nods and smiles.
"Hijo de su puta perra madre."He tells Axel.
"WHY YOU!" Axel gets ready to punch Sora.
"KNOCK IT OFF! He doesn't know what it means! Sora's only a baby." Xion protests and slaps Axel.
"OH YES HE DOES! He knows exactly what it means, that little fucker!" Axel growls.
"Little fucker? Little fucker! Little fucker!" Sora says in a sing-song voice. Larxene slaps Axel.
"DON'T TEACH SORA SWEAR WORDS!" She shouts and stabs him in the head with an Eclair knife.
| LAWL chapter 21 . 8/16/2013
BEST KH FANFIC EVER! XD
I honestly like everything! Especially baby Sora and Anti-Sora parts! XD AND XION! I LOVE XION HERE!
| Henvdemon Of The Sun chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
*giggling* i don't see what you mean about it being a bad fic biddy chan. i like it. it's funny and it makes me smile and laugh. *being honest*
| Halestorming chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I lmao during almost all of this story! You have given me so much entertainment! Thank you! And I do like the way you write the characters, it seems very realistic for each of them, respectively.
| Classified121 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Zomg I found this story and I was like ._. WHOOOO XD this is what got me into fanfics :D
| Crescenta chapter 80 . 1/2/2011
WOW! I spent the whole day reading this story! Nice job sensei!
| Jayfeather238 chapter 65 . 10/24/2010
why do Axel's brownies suck?
| TwilightSky15 chapter 37 . 9/13/2010
does Xion like not have a little special effect noise like the other orgy members or something?
| TwilightSky15 chapter 32 . 9/13/2010
wait if they can tekeport to eachothers cells y dident they just teleport out of the jail in the 1st place?
| TwilightSky15 chapter 12 . 9/12/2010
half drunk? and with larene? wow! O_O'
| underthedarkness chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
Yay you did your homework! The Heart hotel! So far this story is pretty interesting.
| AceTrainer9642 chapter 56 . 8/11/2010
BACON SOAP! XD
| AceTrainer9642 chapter 23 . 8/11/2010
Uh...was Riku's number randomly thought up, or...how'd you come up with it?
| Demix13 chapter 36 . 7/27/2010
i justn relized something ...ORGINIZATION CAN TELEPORT!
| Demix13 chapter 32 . 7/27/2010
KEYBLADE UNLOCK JIAL :P