Reviews for Learning to Breathe
Sandra46 chapter 9 . 3/20
Hi I’m really sorry you haven’t posted anymore chapters to this story. I’ve really enjoyed it so far and like the change . Shame
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 9 . 10/30/2015
Awesome story! Great update! Love it! Hope you get a chance to write more soon.
Crystalena chapter 9 . 9/16/2015
Ooooooooooh! This is so good! I can't believe there are no more chapters to read! It's been a while since I found a fic where I'm dying to read the next chapter! Even though I knew this fic was incomplete and the fact that there was only 9 chapters written, as well as the fact that I'd be risking feeling the way I currently do if this fic turned out to be great, and obviously it did (actually, exceeded my expectation by far) I still couldn't help reading it! Arrrggh why oh why did this fic have to be so intriguing...:( Hoping for a miracle that this fic updates soooooooon! Pleeeeease!
Crystalena chapter 7 . 9/16/2015
Now that was probably the WORST thing anyone could have said to her, especially knowing most of what she'd been through. matter what, there would be no way I'd stay; I'd leave him asap...if not for the things he's done so far but for saying those words to her, no matter how upset he was. Guess Bella was right, she's in for a long haul...
Crystalena chapter 6 . 9/16/2015
I'd meant to read only the 1st chapter, just out of curiosity, since I knew this fic was an unfinished one (not a WIP since it seems like it hadn't been updated in the longest time). However, I immediately got sucked in...and couldn't stop reading. As a huge Jasper fan, I'd have to say that this Jasper isn't the kind of Jasper I love...well, usually. I do love darkspers but this darksper seemed irredeemable in the beginning, especially since he'd put complete blame for all his wrongdoings (pretty much till this chapter, ch.6) on Bella. However, Bella's storytelling made me cry almost every chapter, which was the main reason why I couldn't stop reading in the first place. Even after all the pain and neglect she'd endured, she did her best in surviving and so innocently kept her hopes in the Cullen's. It's so unfortunate that this fic isn't updating. It's very well written and very intriguing! Jasper slowely, but surely, starts showing his redeeming qualities which makes me want to read more. Guess I'll leave this fic in my alerts and keep my hopes that this author may someday have the time and motivation to continue this story...
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15/2015
wtf this was such a great ass story you asshole. 2009! seriously
dettyfan chapter 9 . 6/7/2015
hi, I think is a terrific story. It looks like it has been a while since you have update it. If by any chance you return to the fandom please try to finish it up. I liked the AU and your Darksper. Your Bella is ballsy and has potential to be terribly funny in all her relaxing ways while being in the middle of a war zone. Thank you and congratulations.
Jasper-Damon's Princess chapter 9 . 2/28/2015
I love this story :)
I hope you update soon...please
I can't wait to
Michaela chapter 9 . 1/25/2015
Any chance there will be an update? I havent been hooked like this for ages!
beth626 chapter 9 . 10/1/2014
Grt story...pls continue
Sandra46 chapter 9 . 3/5/2014
Is this the final chapter?
laceshadow chapter 9 . 2/23/2014
Please update
catjumped1 chapter 9 . 5/28/2013
How sad that you haven't continued this story as it it quite good.
scruffydoc chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
truly awesome, once again. I don't know if you monitor this site anymore or get these reviews, but I wanted to let you know how talented you are.
SunAndMoon42 chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
I absolutely enjoyed this story. It was great. And I loved the way Jasper was represented. Even further, I loved your Bella. I prefer Bella strong and independent rather than weak and pathetic. Great job on story too. Can't wait for further chaps. Please update soon.
794 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »