Reviews for The Curse
Pokefan5729 chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Why is it stopped? You realize this is a perfect plot set up that most insane people love?!(I'm crazy!) and that you just stopped it? I've been looking at this since 2009 and not even another chapter?! Thanks completely insane you can't end a story like this or people will kill you in your sleep you should write a 5 or more chapter story or ask someone if they will do it for you then you won't die in your sleep (logic right?)(I'm not threatening you, just exaggerating a lot so don't put me on court).
MarioKarkat chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
What the fuck?
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Person chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Please make a sequel, please-please-please. Those two need to have their own adventures.
And hormones should cause them to mate...
Please!
idk chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
continue it! I want to see their kids!XD
Balthazor the Destroyer of Man chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I can see a sequal of this someday.
Mew Siul chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Please do a sequel.

Seriusly its a GREAT history.

Please, pretty please,...
Starsea chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Honestly, I don't think that you should have made Ash a girl. It would have been better if you would have kept him as a guy.
kyothefallenkit chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This is interesting XD Please update really really soon! XDXD
Who's the mon chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This is great. Please continue this story
FantasyMan92 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
PLEASE ADD MORE! it was a cool story, but could have had alot more added.
Lucario 4ever chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
okay... why did you make him turn into a girl?
narutodragon chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
please continue this looks like a great start
Urufu-chan chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Yay! Continue this please, it seems VERY interesting, and ash as a girl, lol XD Can't wait to see what happens next, and also can't wait for more Pikachu and Ash! Update Soon!
aly poke fan chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
great story
AyumiKarou chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is a realy good story but i would like it if it had a lot more chapters and i think ash a pikachu should become more intemint. Ash should also began his adventure and travel as always but release his pokemon.
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