Reviews for Pedophilia
please more chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Riku's-Way-to-the-Dawn chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Its a shame it seems like you've stopped writing. It would be nice to have some closure. These characters need a happy ending. Poor Hayner always seems to get the most F*$ed up in A/U's. Good luck to you in the service!

Kunoichi21 chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
I hope to God that eventually you can update this again because holy shit... I... This is too dark for me not to know what happens. And the plot for it is just... It's not /entirely/ original simply because I've read a few other stories where Roxas (and maybe others) gets kidnapped and sold into the world of human trafficking, but the way you present it is completely your own way and I am /begging/ here, please update if you can. This was thrown together? I can't even tell, and I'm usually quite a critic.

The fact that you've done your research is amazing to me, because I know so many others wouldn't take that time to do things correctly... And the fact that I'm planning to join the FBI someday, well... This just plays into that, right? I'm sure you've heard others (or rather, read others' words) begging you to update, but please. With a story like this, I have to see it through to the end. One of the stronger compulsions I have with my slight-and-self-diagnosed OCD. Please.
fsjdafklsdajfkldsajfklsdaf chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Oh wow.. I really like this. Like, oh my goodness. I was looking at Annie Christ's favourite authors, and yours was the only penname I didn't recognise, so I read everything on your fic list.. and I'm so glad I did, your writing is amazing!

I really like Pedophilia because it's absolutely incredible, and addresses two very controversial topics very well, and gives me otp feels. Really, what more could I want!

I do hope you continue writing this -patience is a virtue...-, and I'll eagerly await anything and everything you write!
anafiretime chapter 4 . 6/22/2012
I like this story. It's really ... dark and the setting is good for this plot. I once read a story with the same plot but it was all lighthearted and was so unrealistic I couldn't keep reading it. This is more realistic and believable in my POV.

Just one question. Why are there US FBI agents in Brazil?

and good luck with the Navy my brothers in the Army. (he calls his higher ups idiots for some things they do and yet he's a lieutenant.)(I don't mean to offend you.)
Takara yume chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
woah~ such an interesting chapter~ and loving the plot! can't wait to see more~ w
The Crystal Pen chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
This chapter brought me to tears. *wipes* I alway thought Luxord as a very kind man. Please do update soon.
Deuu chapter 4 . 10/14/2011
I know it's a long shot asking you to update considering the last time you did so. But...please?
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 4 . 8/7/2011
omg, you're in the navy? the us american navy? or british? or somewere's else?

i secretly love this story. i hope for more as soon as possible. thanks for writing this.
Endings Matter Most chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
I really like this. I think it's interesting. I can't wait to read the rest. :)
Draco Oblivion chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
Yay an update! I never imagined the person writing about paedophillia would be in the navy though XD

Lol, I was hoping the needle was Axel not going through with it and not him preferring to do it when Roxy's unconscious XD

Aw, Luxord actually thinks it's okay... Hopefully he isn't the other agent...

I hate Xaldin in this...

Aw Roxas is comforting Axel. I really have to admire Roxas in this.

Those two are quite cute together :D
NekoNamii99 chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
aaaaaaah, my god! i know i'm prolly gunna sound like a major dick when i say this, but i really like this story. i feel so bad for Roxas and the others. keep up the hard work, and update soon please!
Ldrmas chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
I can't wait to see more!
Candy3314 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
The navay... wow. :( Guess it gonna be awhile huh? That sucks.. Well ill wait ;p
bbb136 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
You joined the navy? You poor, poor thing. But good for you all the same.

Man I feel bad for... everybody.
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