Reviews for Punishment
Forgetticus chapter 4 . 1h
My friend sent this to me with a note that said, 'READ THIS ALONE'.
I thought, 'Whatever, I've read it all.'
Wrong.

The way it starts is great. I didn't need to be on the quittich pitch, I didn't need to be there when the bet was made. I needed exactly this amount of back story. Writing the first chapter from Harry's perspective was killer. When Draco decided to bite and propose more, I lost my mind.

Thank you for getting up close and personal from here on out. I love that Draco hasn't really done this before, but is being lead by instinct, Harry's queues, and his dick. You danced on the line of consent perfectly for my taste - it wouldn't have been fun if Harry didn't keep choosing to be there. And the development of responsibility on Draco's part is breathtaking. His desire to do things to please Harry, buying things he thinks he'll like, god, all those ties, his ability to see, act on and care about Harry's limits make a perfect storm of brain rotting smut that nearly put me in a coma.

I love that he eventually treats Harry like something very precious. I hope Harry is able to come to terms with the arrangement because he still seems so torn when it ends. Sleep deprived, figity, unable to concentrate. It fit perfectly, but I would love to see him evolve as well. See it all evolve into a healthier relationship for Harry, if he can process that.

I also think you handled the 'ordering the submissive character to come or not' trope like a pro. It was believable every time, not contrived. That usually has me running for the hills.

And the reward he gets. Oh. Thank you for killing me so softly.
Kalidreamine chapter 1 . 5/27
It has been a really long time since this has been written! But I discovered it this year and I really appreciate your talent. This is a real piece of work ! Amazing!
HPTrio chapter 4 . 5/17
I don't know if you're even still checking for reviews, but may I just say "Holy Shit!"
Kas chapter 4 . 4/7
Wow. This is probably the kinkiest and best written smut I have ever read. I mean it's incredible. You have talent my friend. Talent that many do not have. This is my new go-to fanfic. Thank you for creating this.
Magnolia C chapter 2 . 3/9
I can read only two chapters of this story... All I can say is... you write smut incredibly well and I am highly disturbed by how much porn you must have watched/read/experienced to get this good...
A ghost chapter 4 . 3/3
I wonder how many people died reading this...
s chapter 4 . 2/17
omg this is so hot and amazing.
Sibyl chapter 4 . 2/12
Pleeasee please please pleeeeaseee finish this story Chery Just one more chapter. Do it for us, your fans who have been reading and rereading your stories obsessively for years and need closure.
Val chapter 4 . 1/31
Pretty sure you just killed me too. ~curled up on the floor in a puddle twitching~
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
Honestly I never posted any review but this is one of my favorites fics. I read it a couple times and the porn kills me .TIME. you are the best
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
You have murdered me with porn
Guest chapter 3 . 12/26/2016
I'm dead... can't make it chapter four... read it for me my fellow drarry lovers!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/22/2016
I have read this story a few times and I've made it to the 4th chappie... my brain also melted and tricked out my ears I guess.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2016
On a gravestone it says:

R.I.P
Cheryl Dyson
Death of Porn
"Long live Drarry!"

Behind that gravestone are all the others who died reading her porn.

Cheryl nor her readers regret it.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/22/2016
I'm wondering how someone could concentrate while proofreading this.
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