Reviews for Brothers
Dino-Rogue chapter 14 . 7/22/2014
"Ask your brother if you doubt my ability to make someone's life a living hell." Hahaha! Oh, we all know, Bulma. Three-Years fic, anyone? :)

Oh, but this is... ah, not good. Not good at all.

"Before he knew it, Table's entire body was numb up to the throat." Haha! You missed an 'R'.. though, in Dragon Ball Wiki, they actually stated that Tarble's name could be a wordplay on that word, 'Table', seeing as his brother's name is 'Vegeta'...

Oh, I so, so can't wait to see what will happen next!
Dino-Rogue chapter 13 . 7/22/2014
Sheesh... fantasies versus realities, brothers versus not-brothers, Trunks versus Tarble! My goodness, this needs to be taken care of... :)

Nice chapter! Setting up the nension, oh my.
Dino-Rogue chapter 12 . 7/22/2014
Argh! And just when it was getting better, too! But I guess mending a relationship and healing scars really need a lot of time, no?

Nice chapter! More fixing to do with their family, I see. Or at least, in this case, simply the brothers and... well, and Trunks. :)
Dino-Rogue chapter 11 . 7/22/2014
"Vegeta?" Trunks asked, shocked. ...Hahaha! You mean, Tarble, not Trunks! LOL!

Ha! Sacred? The Gravity Room? No way! :)

Aww, true! Bulma melts away the clouds of a "good-bad mood" (if there's such a thing, but apparently, there is, for this Prince), especially Vegeta's! That's her talent when it comes to her husband...

"I don't know why it surprises everyone that Vegeta actually gives a damn about his family." Ha! The words only Bulma... and we Vegeta fans, could say with all proudness! :)

Aww! Of course you are family, Tarble! Gosh...

I love this chapter! It really is quite the same situation, only this is between brothers, not soon-to-be lovers...
Dino-Rogue chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
Hahaha! Training, then recon, eh, Bulma? Well, she is smart for a reason, I guess... And indeed, she knows she's got the best! Haha! Vegeta... I love these two, so much! Well, the time for 'the talk' has finally come...

"They did not see Tarble again until dinner." Hahahahaha! That almost made me fall off my chair; poor Tarble! OH!
"So, this is that whole 'now you are a man' talk?" "No, this is the 'my wife is making me do this so let's get it done and over with' talk. Now start talking!" Hahaha! 'Vegeta, the talk-giver'! And Tarble almost reversed the roles, too... but not for long... two hours ago? Not just reproducing, but... recreation? R and R for Bulma and Vegeta, their feel-good thing... oh, gosh, and Tarble had to hear all the "fun" facts... However: "It was hardly a secret that many children actually were the result of two idiots still within the stages of puberty. That was one thing that would need to be corrected…" I totally agree, Vegeta.

Nice chapter! Funny, and a little... erm, ahem, educating? Hahaha!
Dino-Rogue chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
Hahahaha! That ending... what a request, Tarble...

Oh, that's why Vegeta is, well... erm, short? Haha! Sorry, Prince, but you are. Too bad, though. All Frieza's fault... so that's why he lets Trunks train at his own pace, even if he dislikes the boy's 'slack atitude' at times.

Nice chapter! A look into Saiyans reaching adulthood...
Dino-Rogue chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
Oh-ho-ho! Puberty, at last, for Tarble! Ah, he is not going to like this, is he? :) Sheesh, what a mess...

Love this one! Gosh, Saiyan puberty's tougher than I thought...
Dino-Rogue chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
Ah, slowly, but surely, I hope.

Ha, only Saiyans would find fighting, not training, relaxing! Haha!

Has it crossed Vegeta's mind that if Tarble did tell Bulma, she would be making him, not his younger brother, babysit the kids? Though he'll probably find a way out of it, knowing him and Trunks... ahem to bribes... :)

Awesome chappie! Loving this fic more and more!
Dino-Rogue chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
...What is it, Gure? What is going on? Oh, I'd better hit 'next', now! :)

Aww! For once, Vegeta feels concern, true concern for Tarble... and for once, Bulma listened to her husband.

Hahaha! I love this chapter! A flustered and ultimately clueless Tarble, a date-crazy Bulma, an excited albeit just as clueless as her husband Gure... and a panicking and desperate-to-run (out of experience) Vegeta! Awesome one!
Dino-Rogue chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Oh, poor Tarble! Marron in the mix, too? And... what? Bulma, enjoying this all? "If there was going to be torture involved in her household, she wanted a piece of the action.
It sounded like a lot of fun!" Gosh, satistic couple... Vegeta's starting to rub off on you, girl! :)

What a chappie! Love this!
Dino-Rogue chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
...A warm shower, eh? Gosh, these two are in it, deep and hard. :)

Aww, Tarble's love for his wife... hmm, he does have a good point, though, The husband outliving the wife or the other way around never sounds pleasant, at all. It's sadder than sad...

Hahaha! His tail, between his legs... literally? Hahaah! Nice!

I love this chapter! I shall read on!
Scarylady chapter 17 . 7/18/2014
Goku always has this weird tendency to waffle between goofball, serious warrior and sage and you've really captured it here...:)
Dino-Rogue chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Aww! A freebie, huh? There you go, Vegeta! See? No need to blame Tarble for not coming earlier, like what you said to Bulma. Aside from your reputation, he was sent away, apparently not wanted and not that much needed in your planet, so perhaps he though, why would now be any different? Plus, he did find peace and loved it.

Hahaha! The 'wrestling' bit; way to ease the tension...
Hahaha! Lower... than Yamcha's? Sad? Trunks, you crack me up!

Woah! They used to cell Saiyan tale? The other reasons for other people hunting Vegeta were not really all that surprising, but that... wow. So he definitely knows just how much of a jewel sleep is to his brother, as it means as much as it does to him. The 'not destroying him psychologically'? Yeah, I'd bet that's part of it.

Hahaha! Trunks is evil-good-kind... and smart, so very smart. :) Of course his dad would make sense to him; he's practically him, only the litteler version! Haha! And... "retribution for a second slight could be hazardous to one's health." Oh, so true. Like, 'the whole universe knows' true. :) Gotta love Trunks' deductions and his clever mind...

"Almost exited"? You mean, 'Excited', right? :) And speaking of which, Trunks getting pretty excited about joining his dad's idea of 'fun'. The... erm, torturous kind. Hehehehe!

"So," she began, "you have brother, huh?" I think you're missing the 'A' before 'Brother'...

Awesome chappie you've given us here, sweet work1
Dino-Rogue chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
Hahahaha! Love that ending!

This is pretty awesome! Brother bonding, coming right up! :)

Great fic, nice job!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/3/2014
It was really really awesome!
I loved the story!
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