Reviews for Brothers
Dino-Rogue chapter 21 . 7/22/2014
*Sigh* Can I still handle this? Jealousy over his dad and Tarble, misconceptions about being a big brother, and a partly true, partly not true statement about Gohan (enough said)... ay, Trunks...

Ah, perfect! Job done. Even though Bulma's the one who caused him to talk to him, and Trunks knows this, he understands now, finally, and is grateful for the conversation. He finally appreciates the whole thing. Awesome work, Veg! :)

Killing spree... Trunks, I do not need to say that you are overreacting. Too much. Way too much. Screwed, huh? Bulma, the one unhappy? Oh, just you wait, boys... especially you, Vegeta... that daughter's going to have you wrapped around her doll-playing, cute sweet little finger.

I love this! Things are starting to get better...
Dino-Rogue chapter 20 . 7/22/2014
Aww, sweet ending... I love those!

Aww, he still thinks this was a mistake? Ah, again... poor Tarble... Oh, my... The little princess of the Briefs is coming... Trunks, you've certainly got quite a great deal of maturing to do and sharing to learn now. Seriously. I'm not liking his attitude one bit. I have not liked it for the past few chapters he has been acting that way. Ay-ay-ay, ask the brother you'd just met about parents you've never met and you get stuck in bed for three days. Yup, that's the Vegeta-way, all right. Gosh...

Haha! I love this chapter... can't wait to see what happens next...
Dino-Rogue chapter 19 . 7/22/2014
Oh, no matter what you husbands say, these are such wonderful wives you've got! I like Gure, especially her personality.

...Such threats, Bulma... wow, Trunks... imagine this family you've got... no, don't imagine... I forgot, you live with them! Hahaha! Oh, wow... "You are Gure going star gazing tonight?" Ha, um, 'And', author, not 'Are'... :) Hahaha! 'Therapy', 'stalemate of a brotherhood' and 'lunatics' are right, Bulma... gosh, she certainly knows how to get Vegeta... get him good, too. Haha! I find it funny that to Vegeta, all of the "dumb ideas" she mentioned are ultimately that, dumb... only to him. Never to us or Bulma, for that matter. :) Gosh, only guys, particularly Saiyans, can 'relish' bad moods... or perhaps, yes, men in general, really. Ha-ha.

Well, that's still progress, no matter how gradual or little.

Nice chapter!
Dino-Rogue chapter 18 . 7/22/2014
He'd rather go to the mall that the beach? No way! I'd think he'd like it there, what with the peace and calm and all... not the mal, which is definitely more costly, regardless of what he may think! unbelievable, Vegeta. Hmm...

There he goes again! Poor Tarble, no idea of what flurting is, then given the idea of the lovers' thing, then runs away blushing. This is becoming an endless thing now...

What, Bulma? Funeral? Gosh, is she simply getting ahead of herself or has she decided not to abuse the Dragon Balls or something? :) Just making sure that you haven't matured at all since I first met you." Hahaha! Aww, he has... well, sort of... but hey, both of you are perhaps on the same level! Haha! Haha! He does not hate Krillin? Well, I guess not anymore, ever since, like, during/after the Cell Games? But Vegeta does need to learn what 'Comprende' means... :) ...Vegeta, I am not even going to ask you anything about that whole Piccolo-not-knowing-what-sex-is statement, all rightie? Good. Right. Hehehe! But... Goku is your.. ahem, 'resident expert on going years without sex'? Hahaha! Seriously? Vegeta, 'hour of need'... you are supposed to be the one, not Goku! Oh, no... this is going downhill, and fast...

Ah, a few more chappies to go! Will things besides this whole body-matters one be resolved between the Saiyan brothers?

Awesome job as always!
Dino-Rogue chapter 17 . 7/22/2014
"Grumpily, Vegeta nodded. "There is a very high probability that this will need to repeated two to four more times." Umm. where is the 'Be' before the 'repeated'? "Life is not fair," Vegeta coldly answered. "Anyone telling you otherwise is either lying or mentally deranged." Ah, sadly, Vegeta, you are not mistaken about that. Piccolo or Eighteen with Tarble? Truuuunks! Poor Tarble... :)

Hmmm, "the do not want to see you for the remainder of the day." You missed the 'Y', friend...

Hahaha! "You know, I went seven years…" Goku, you are just the most funny, silly, awesome-best, you! Catching Vegeta... er, occupied like that, too occupied to cannot talk with... much less fight! Hahaha! "Issues with timing", you think! Priceless!

Huh, figures, these brothers are too stubborn for their own good; I mean, you'd think they'd already give in, what with all the offers, bribes, threats, even means, you said?! Gosh.

Hahaha! Anyone would get a cardiac episode with Goku's popping up...

Wow, he is so right! I mean, we all know that Goku's not the school kind of smart, but he's right; everyone has their way! Hmmm, ""Gohan tends to explain things until no one else understand him," the 'understand' surely needs an 'S' at the end, though. Sorry! ;)

Haha! Speak Vegeta-ese. Something that Bulma has mastered a long, looong time ago.

"I think it's really, really sad that you and Vegeta have this great opportunity to be a family, but you've both been hurt so much by other people that neither of you really seems to be able to have a brother." ...Wow! Goku, you need to have some kind of heart-to-heart session/talk with these stubborn twosome, now. Hhehehe! He may not be good with feelings or catching subtle hints, but he's certainly good with people!

*Gasp* Raditz! Right! How could I forget? Aww, Goku... seeing Tarble did that... well, there it is, then. ...Hmmp, though, great humanitarian? Nah, sadly, not even likely, Goku. Oh...

Hahahaa! But... 'kind of screwed up'? Told ya, no sense of tact or idea of subtlety at all!

Ah, it is definitely worth a shot, Tarbs; for yourself and for Vegeta, listen. Take the following days to really do that. That's what you two need. Years, days, it doesn't matter. Goku's right.

What an introspective, lovely chappie! Unexpected... or maybe not, great advice from Goku! Love this! Hope things start getting better from here on out.
Dino-Rogue chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
"That's not something his can control."Um, 'He', I think, is what you're looking for. "What better way is there to torture a Saiyan than by asking them to talk about their feelings?"" Haha! She is so right! That's true, though. Goku's good with fighting, making people happy and making them feel his happiness, but the feelings area is never really all there. Hehehehe! Aww, and peaking of happiness... this house certainly needs even the slightest drop of it right now! Oh, I hope this whole grim situation improves in the next chappies! Awesome one here, though!
Dino-Rogue chapter 14 . 7/22/2014
"Ask your brother if you doubt my ability to make someone's life a living hell." Hahaha! Oh, we all know, Bulma. Three-Years fic, anyone? :)

Oh, but this is... ah, not good. Not good at all.

"Before he knew it, Table's entire body was numb up to the throat." Haha! You missed an 'R'.. though, in Dragon Ball Wiki, they actually stated that Tarble's name could be a wordplay on that word, 'Table', seeing as his brother's name is 'Vegeta'...

Oh, I so, so can't wait to see what will happen next!
Dino-Rogue chapter 13 . 7/22/2014
Sheesh... fantasies versus realities, brothers versus not-brothers, Trunks versus Tarble! My goodness, this needs to be taken care of... :)

Nice chapter! Setting up the nension, oh my.
Dino-Rogue chapter 12 . 7/22/2014
Argh! And just when it was getting better, too! But I guess mending a relationship and healing scars really need a lot of time, no?

Nice chapter! More fixing to do with their family, I see. Or at least, in this case, simply the brothers and... well, and Trunks. :)
Dino-Rogue chapter 11 . 7/22/2014
"Vegeta?" Trunks asked, shocked. ...Hahaha! You mean, Tarble, not Trunks! LOL!

Ha! Sacred? The Gravity Room? No way! :)

Aww, true! Bulma melts away the clouds of a "good-bad mood" (if there's such a thing, but apparently, there is, for this Prince), especially Vegeta's! That's her talent when it comes to her husband...

"I don't know why it surprises everyone that Vegeta actually gives a damn about his family." Ha! The words only Bulma... and we Vegeta fans, could say with all proudness! :)

Aww! Of course you are family, Tarble! Gosh...

I love this chapter! It really is quite the same situation, only this is between brothers, not soon-to-be lovers...
Dino-Rogue chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
Hahaha! Training, then recon, eh, Bulma? Well, she is smart for a reason, I guess... And indeed, she knows she's got the best! Haha! Vegeta... I love these two, so much! Well, the time for 'the talk' has finally come...

"They did not see Tarble again until dinner." Hahahahaha! That almost made me fall off my chair; poor Tarble! OH!
"So, this is that whole 'now you are a man' talk?" "No, this is the 'my wife is making me do this so let's get it done and over with' talk. Now start talking!" Hahaha! 'Vegeta, the talk-giver'! And Tarble almost reversed the roles, too... but not for long... two hours ago? Not just reproducing, but... recreation? R and R for Bulma and Vegeta, their feel-good thing... oh, gosh, and Tarble had to hear all the "fun" facts... However: "It was hardly a secret that many children actually were the result of two idiots still within the stages of puberty. That was one thing that would need to be corrected…" I totally agree, Vegeta.

Nice chapter! Funny, and a little... erm, ahem, educating? Hahaha!
Dino-Rogue chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
Hahahaha! That ending... what a request, Tarble...

Oh, that's why Vegeta is, well... erm, short? Haha! Sorry, Prince, but you are. Too bad, though. All Frieza's fault... so that's why he lets Trunks train at his own pace, even if he dislikes the boy's 'slack atitude' at times.

Nice chapter! A look into Saiyans reaching adulthood...
Dino-Rogue chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
Oh-ho-ho! Puberty, at last, for Tarble! Ah, he is not going to like this, is he? :) Sheesh, what a mess...

Love this one! Gosh, Saiyan puberty's tougher than I thought...
Dino-Rogue chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
Ah, slowly, but surely, I hope.

Ha, only Saiyans would find fighting, not training, relaxing! Haha!

Has it crossed Vegeta's mind that if Tarble did tell Bulma, she would be making him, not his younger brother, babysit the kids? Though he'll probably find a way out of it, knowing him and Trunks... ahem to bribes... :)

Awesome chappie! Loving this fic more and more!
Dino-Rogue chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
...What is it, Gure? What is going on? Oh, I'd better hit 'next', now! :)

Aww! For once, Vegeta feels concern, true concern for Tarble... and for once, Bulma listened to her husband.

Hahaha! I love this chapter! A flustered and ultimately clueless Tarble, a date-crazy Bulma, an excited albeit just as clueless as her husband Gure... and a panicking and desperate-to-run (out of experience) Vegeta! Awesome one!
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