Reviews for Brothers
Dino-Rogue chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Oh, poor Tarble! Marron in the mix, too? And... what? Bulma, enjoying this all? "If there was going to be torture involved in her household, she wanted a piece of the action.
It sounded like a lot of fun!" Gosh, satistic couple... Vegeta's starting to rub off on you, girl! :)

What a chappie! Love this!
Dino-Rogue chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
...A warm shower, eh? Gosh, these two are in it, deep and hard. :)

Aww, Tarble's love for his wife... hmm, he does have a good point, though, The husband outliving the wife or the other way around never sounds pleasant, at all. It's sadder than sad...

Hahaha! His tail, between his legs... literally? Hahaah! Nice!

I love this chapter! I shall read on!
Scarylady chapter 17 . 7/18/2014
Goku always has this weird tendency to waffle between goofball, serious warrior and sage and you've really captured it here...:)
Dino-Rogue chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Aww! A freebie, huh? There you go, Vegeta! See? No need to blame Tarble for not coming earlier, like what you said to Bulma. Aside from your reputation, he was sent away, apparently not wanted and not that much needed in your planet, so perhaps he though, why would now be any different? Plus, he did find peace and loved it.

Hahaha! The 'wrestling' bit; way to ease the tension...
Hahaha! Lower... than Yamcha's? Sad? Trunks, you crack me up!

Woah! They used to cell Saiyan tale? The other reasons for other people hunting Vegeta were not really all that surprising, but that... wow. So he definitely knows just how much of a jewel sleep is to his brother, as it means as much as it does to him. The 'not destroying him psychologically'? Yeah, I'd bet that's part of it.

Hahaha! Trunks is evil-good-kind... and smart, so very smart. :) Of course his dad would make sense to him; he's practically him, only the litteler version! Haha! And... "retribution for a second slight could be hazardous to one's health." Oh, so true. Like, 'the whole universe knows' true. :) Gotta love Trunks' deductions and his clever mind...

"Almost exited"? You mean, 'Excited', right? :) And speaking of which, Trunks getting pretty excited about joining his dad's idea of 'fun'. The... erm, torturous kind. Hehehehe!

"So," she began, "you have brother, huh?" I think you're missing the 'A' before 'Brother'...

Awesome chappie you've given us here, sweet work1
Dino-Rogue chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
Hahahaha! Love that ending!

This is pretty awesome! Brother bonding, coming right up! :)

Great fic, nice job!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/3/2014
It was really really awesome!
I loved the story!
LoveGlutton chapter 23 . 12/10/2013
A good way to end it

Everyone was in character and the psychologyy of it all was beautiful
LoveGlutton chapter 21 . 12/10/2013
Aaaaaaaaaawwwww
Hive Queen To Harbinger chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
Okay, that inside joke cooking thing was hysterical.
Joe B chapter 23 . 10/19/2013
Excellent! Thank you!
Beauty Eclipsed chapter 23 . 10/12/2013
Great chapter!
HawkAngel XD chapter 24 . 10/11/2013
that was very very nice! lovely work!

HawkAngel
Duo's chibi Deathscythe chapter 23 . 10/11/2013
I really enjoyed this story. Sad to see it end; there's not enough family-based stories with Vegeta as the main character, and definitely not enough Tarble stories period. Parts of the earlier chapters made me tear up, the frustration, the broken dreams, the desire to have somewhere to belong... Beautifully written!

I started to post this on 24, but 24 is just a copy of 23... so in case a new chapter is posted, there won't be any reviews lost I hope. Hope to read the real 24 soon!
pannybaby123 chapter 24 . 10/11/2013
great chapter :)
Ermilus chapter 23 . 9/26/2013
I like it
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