Reviews for Make Up Your Mind
Sym chapter 19 . 12/21/2013
I think that this Wolf-Pack story that is really interesting. I got caught up in Trisha's world since Keep Your Hands To Yourself, and I actually liked reading from her perspective. Trisha was flawed and head strong, which made reading her a lot better than how Stephanie Meyer wrote Bella Swan. I've read stories on here where I actually liked Bella. So, I some writers can just write their characters and make them seem like real people. Trisha felt real to me in both the q1original story and the sequel. There were some parts that I didn't like, but I kept on reading, because I was hooked into your story. Trisha, David, and Ethan were like that soap opera that you watch even though you tell yourself you won't. I am so glad thatTrisha ended up with David, though. Thank you for writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
In the end I don't really think their love is as strong as the beginning as I think David still has his doubts, read this story heaps over the years btw, will always remember it
Tagay2 chapter 19 . 2/22/2013
Loved this story so much. Perfect ending too. Makes my heart all warm and tingly!
Tagay2 chapter 17 . 2/22/2013
This chapter was great. Its the perfect interpretation i had of trisha and why she left with ethan and also now for her closure. She just always had a hard time doing things for her. With so many people butting in your life it gets difficult. I think you really expressed those emotions well in this chapter. :-)
Tagay2 chapter 15 . 2/22/2013
Ngawww jared. Always the family man.
Tagay2 chapter 14 . 2/22/2013
Love the table idea. So warm and home feeling.
Tagay2 chapter 10 . 2/21/2013
I really like what youve done with the story, its sooo fluffy :-) And i think in a way it was good that trisha did go away and how you portrayed what happened was perfect, even though she was with ethanshe was also learning and growing as a person. And what a great idea of rebuilding the place, really signifies new beginnings. That happens a lot at the Black residence. Nice job! Really loving the story!
Tagay2 chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
Gosh i hate funerals :(
Tagay2 chapter 3 . 2/21/2013
Uh oh!
betzen84 chapter 19 . 11/20/2012
3 love your work..
Encypher chapter 19 . 11/13/2012
The girls sound adorable. I'm glad they're starting to mend their relationship with Ethan. Did Trisha every go back to see Alondra?
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
most definitely David with Trisha! I love the fact that although David is pretty darn oblivious to much things among him, he's not an airhead. He's got a huge heart.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/26/2012
Can you make a story about seth and jesse?
Guest chapter 19 . 7/2/2012
wow this story was amazing so much up and down feeling i luv it and i kope number five is a boy cause that alot of girl lol really good writer
Argiessa chapter 19 . 4/22/2012
Loved it!
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