|Reviews for Superwomen of Eva 2: Blue Defiance|
| Archnecromancer King chapter 14 . 10/22/2013
Great chapter! Does not would be a crossover with Evangelion if the well-intentioned plans of Ritsuko not exploded in her face spectacularly. But I must admit that when she began to act with less caution and obliterated the Mass Production Evas, I got excited more than I was worried. Surprised me and I thought worthy of the great woman that you made her.
Thank you again for your hard work and for sharing your story with us, good luck to your life and work and your muse bless you more and more forever!
| Gundam Kaiser chapter 15 . 10/16/2013
... goddamn Reach always come around screwing everything up. Ah well, at least Armisael bit the dust without Rei having to kamikaze for it, and the omakes were pretty great too.
| Rassilon001 chapter 15 . 10/13/2013
Wow... for a moment, I thought maybe Beetle was actually a goner... thank goodness for that Bleed. And while her outing has clearly shaken Shinji's belief in her, I'm glad to see it wasn't completely destroyed by her unmasking. One can only wonder how the likes of Maya is coping with the shock.
But if she's going down its clear Ritsuko intends to go down swinging, just like she did in End of Eva. Only this time she has a reliable super weapon on her side, not that damn MAGI Mommy. Taking out all the Mass Production Eva's will definitely help, but something tells me that the Reach enhanced Jet Alone is going to be back and major trouble in the finale of this story. To say nothing of the Reach themselves now that they're on the scene. The potential horrors a whole race of invaders who made the scarab could unleash is staggering.
Especially if they brought their Black Bug enforcer with them. And I wonder if the Reach was welcomed (as it seems to be) how it affects Misato's stint as the Green Lantern. Her connection to Oa has always been rather loose, but if its interplanetary law it could be a factor in the story in some fashion.
| Quathis chapter 15 . 10/12/2013
Well, that's quite the flashback you had there- major battle, first contact with alien species, and possible near end of the world. Though I have to wonder what the world will do with Reach tech against Angels. Can the Angels say "WTF"? Oh, and now I know what Homer Simpson would be like as an alien conqueror! Thanks for that laugh. Until next time.
| justbehappydammit chapter 15 . 10/11/2013
Well, now the Reach are invading(?). That is somehow both expected and unexpected. I didn't see this coming, but I probably should have. This definitely complicates things.
(I find it amusing that three of your SoE2 stories have dealt with alien invasions of varying sizes, but this one has the biggest)
| Selias chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
"It also didn't help that none of the stuff you research has to do with solar energy, lasers, or light in any form,"
Not true. She was researching Angel DNA at one point, and found that it was something along the lines of a 99% match with human DNA, other than being made out of a different type of matter "characterized by both particulate and wave properties, like light."
| Akatsuki001 chapter 14 . 6/26/2013
What can I say about this chapter?
I hope you are a boy because I think I love you xDD
I am always reading your updates but I don't post so much. Sorry about that :P
Your story is so interesting I would like to be able to write in this way. You have written my favorite Rits version.
| Gundam Kaizer chapter 14 . 6/25/2013
The Scarab is suddenly so much funnier now that, for some reason, I imagine him with the voice of KITT from the 80's show Knight Rider. Or sometimes in the voice of Data, from Star Trek: The Next Generation.
... Someone needs to do a Knight Rider style fic where Shinji, Asuka, and/or Rei uses their Evangelions to be superheroes - like Mazinger Angels, or Brave Express Might Gaine - and the EVAs have minds of their own (like, intelligent and can communicate with the pilots and such) and make snarky comments or whatever. Sadly, I lack the chops to pull off this kind of thing, so I won't be the guy to do it.
Sorry, back to the review and off of the rambling. Ah, it's been a long time since I saw Asuka the brat instead of Asuka the champion of justice or at least Asuka the reasonably cool chick. Kinda takes me back, it does... and not really in a good way. Really hoping Asuka can grow out of it in this fic too, but I guess some universes still need their brat, huh?
... GOD DAMN SON OF A BITCH you love your cliffhangers, dontcha? ... Then again, I've been starting to employ them in Morphin' Fate (although there, it's mostly only because they make damn good places to stop writing), so I guess I can't be too critical about that. Still, it was awesome to see Ritsuko obliterate the the MP Evas one after the other like that. Hell, even if she'd let the last one go, it probably would've been okay, since Asuka tore the whole lot of 'em apart by herself in canon. Admittedly, they regenerated when her power ran out, but with just one target to focus on instead of nine, I'm sure she could kill it hard enough to make it stay dead this time.
| Zaralann chapter 14 . 6/13/2013
| animefan29 chapter 14 . 6/8/2013
Well the uncertain fate works for this chapter. Most people will probably assume she's OK but with a lot of the tension, it works.
| IncandescentOne chapter 14 . 6/8/2013
eh she's not eliminated though, right? O_o
Damn this one's hotting up, at least she got past the crimson beetle's fate, though by the skin of her teeth... that was such a chilling cliffhanger because it'd already gone one way so that added a lot to it.
| Quathis chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
When Ritsuko was lamenting how bad things have to be to be stuck in a cave, I half expected Batgirl to step out of the shadows and ask what is wrong with caves. Not a likely event, but one that made me laugh.
Things do look bad for Blue Beetle at the moment, though I'm something happened to keep her alive. This wouldn't be a great way to end the whole story, I'm thinking. I also noticed that Misato didn't voice an opinion to the Children regarding her views. Now I'm betting she really wishes she knew what was going on with her friend. The suspense is great right now, with most of the future events up in the air.
Until next time.
| justbehappydammit chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
You really love keeping us on our toes, don't you?
Well, now Ritsuko is a hero with somewhat-bad publicity. Which seems rather fitting for her, for some reason. And of course, no one could survive that!
(Spoilers, she does.)
| JanessaVR chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
Of all the SOE series, this is certainly my favorite, and I eagerly await an update to it!
Horrible cliffhanger, naughty author, you! :-)
| Zaralann chapter 13 . 2/28/2013
Very nice chapter!