Reviews for Passion
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is a good story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
anon chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
not bad overall, a few bits seemed rushed, but you seriously need a beta to correct your spelling and grammar.
Jezzi1996 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
There was a girl in my school who had a "Practice Safe Lunch: Use Condiments" shirt at my school! I love that phrase! And that's why I always use ketchup. By the way, I think your story is very, very good, on an actually related topic...
karinuuzumaki chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
wow amazing, the naration of the story was so good, i just can feel how is their passion for sure. So lovely! This is a very good story, love it anyway :)

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sorry for my bad english, coz i'm indonesian :P
jker209 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Not really PWP. I mean it sorta had a plot right?
Brown Eggs and Green Ham chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
"abused for years by a teenage hand."

Nice.
charisdutchess93 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
good stuff _
A True Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Well this was hott. lol

Sometimes when they were switching posistions I had to reread to understand exactly what they did, so maybe a little more detail as far as that's concerned, but otherwise this was a good slice of lemon pie! :]]
Mens Mentis chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Dominant Naruto... that's kinky. o_o *Fans self*