Reviews for Ginny's Trial
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 5/12
I'm sorry, Harry, but you should have just let Ginny die.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11
A fun read! My favourite part was when Ron suddenly tried to claim Hermione as his slave - hilarious.

The only critique I have is that it doesn't really make sense for everyone to assure Harry that they're okay with Harry sleeping with Ginny and that she deserves it. Like, it's their daughter/sister. That's a really weird and creepy thing for any brother/father to say about their daughter regardless of what crime she committed and it seemed too OOC.
Jakob chapter 1 . 2/4
Dumbledore beeing weaker then harry is bullshit
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
I like this good, but adding Luna at the end was unneeded and ruined the story imo. This could have been completely fine just H/Hr. Don't get me wrong I love H/Hr/L but like I said Luna wasn't needed here
ExceleKurokami chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Okay, love the Lunar Harmony, as always, but holy Hell! Someone, call a mind healer! Ginny is fucking nuts! Harry is screwing the daylights out of Luna and Hermione and Ginny thinks he's pretending?! That's Ginny is his favorite?! By her 'logic,' Harry's also in love with her mother, father, all her brothers barring Ron, Dumbledore, a hundred aurors and any Ministry people who were present, including Umbridge.

That little girl is SICK!

By the way, your Dumbledore felt more like the Greater!Good Dumbledore that most people use, which isn't too far off from canon, in my opinion. Him trying to convince Harry and Hermione to not press charges against Ginny for trying to lock them into emotional slavery screams Greater Good manipulation. And your Ron was bad, but I've read worse. Make him a blood bigot and make it so that he's willing to rape Hermione to make her 'realize' that she 'wants' to be with him and 'loves' him, and you come close to matching the most evil Ron I've ever read about. Make him willing to kill others, such as Harry and Luna, to get his way and he will match the worst Ron I've seen.

On another note, I was going to do it anyway, but I will be using the 'he loves me and is faking it' Ginny you put together. I rather like the idea of her becoming Potter property, but I think it would be crazier if I have her do something like swearing herself into slavery for House Potter. Makes her seem even crazier, especially if she basically starts to act worse than a common whore in an attempt to make Harry stop faking it and get to his 'favorite' girl.
draco122 chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
that was awesome i loved it
Grace chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
Wtf dont flame somebody like that and do it as a guest. That just shows you're to cowardly to admit to saying that. And it's just a fanFICTION so wtf is your problem.
Very OOC chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
Arthur wouldn't have blamed Molly. It is not Molly's fault... even if Ginny did do it from her mother's tale it was her choice to do so. Her mother did not force her into it.
Also Yes... it was Ron that made Hermione upset and run to the girl's bathroom BUT who laughed along with him? Harry did.
But guess what... they were 11-year-old children at the time... CHILDREN. KIDS. Ron's CANON Words were of a child.
Ron didn't stand by the door it was him that knocked out the troll.
It was him that helped with the chess.
It was him that helped Harry down in the chamber with crazy ass Lockheart.
It was Ron that Harry had to save in the goblet of Fire, not Hermione... Harry cared for Ron you silly Weasley basher... despite him being jealous and upset at the beginning they still cared for each other. They are best friends.
Yes Ron and Ginny have their faults but so do every character.
I see this as a hater that was disappointed that Harry didn't get the main character. Well guess what...
I wanted Harry to be with Luna... but I don't make Ginny into some crazy girl sleeping around. What kind of sick fucks think of this stuff... you made her start doing stuff like this in her fourth year... a 14 year old girl! None of these characters are sick... only you for thinking such things about children. Fictional or not it's disgusting.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Ah! This idea is so original..
Oh wait..
Every Ginny Weasley hater does this takes Poor Molly's comment about love potion and makes the kids be like it too. ARE YOU PEOPLE THICK? Harry and Hermione were not under any love potions. Plus if love potions were against the law They wouldn't be sold in prank stores (no Weasley bashers they were sold in zonkos too don't bring the twins into this bull chap too)
Proof of them not being under love potion is that you seen how people react to it. Ron had it by A student trying to give it to Harry... This is really cannon but there aren't many fits like this about her... But Hermione and Harry must be together... Who cares about trashing Jk's characters along the way.
Disgusting Weasley bashers. Claiming to be Potter fans. More like fake fans.
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
has anyone taken up this story
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
iv never like none of the redheads
stupidhhrshipper chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
The only person who's delusional here is you for thinking that this would happen in canon.

Then again, you're a Harmonian, and Harmony shippers are delusional.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
very, very awesome one-shot! has anyone taken you up on your offer?
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
A well done story. Quite the interesting take about Gunny potioning Harry and Hermione for her own gains. It was a good look at different point of views and their thoughts on the trial as well as what Ginny did to Harry and Hermione. It was amusing to read about Ron's one track mind ess as he saw no wrong and angered when Ginny turned to a slave when it was sort of better than death considering Harry is quite the gentleman. The life debt was a good idea to use in order to save Gunny and that she is still delusional was amusing to no end. Harry, Hermione, and Luna initiating a bond was interesting and well doen as they are the onew able to get through to Harry. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
roon0 chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
I cannot wait to read that story! I did enjoy yours so much.
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