Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veela Life Debts
moodyboy66 chapter 28 . 2/14
Please come back to finish this great story!
jaqmaq77 chapter 26 . 12/1/2023
Chapters 1 to 25... brilliant and enjoyable read... but 26 dropped into, 'What the hell did I smoke with my LSD and my bottle of brandy?' or 'Please don't let Bellatrix touch my computer again...'
Colour me beyond confused...
Let's write down the 100 weirdest ideas ever, select at random and call it chapter 26...
AnimeGuy93 chapter 2 . 10/9/2023
I hate canon Harry fics he's so stupid and simple it kill's most fics
Markan999 chapter 10 . 8/25/2023
A really boring chapter TBH
DRAGONDAVE45 chapter 28 . 3/31/2023
HOW ADRE YOU ABANDON THIS THIS STORY AT THIS POINT! IT'S BEEN ALMOST TEN YEARS! COME BACK AND FINISH THIS!
D.J. Scales chapter 19 . 3/30/2023
Holy scales what a chapter.
D.J. Scales chapter 28 . 3/30/2023
Holy scales that was epic.
DRAGONDAVE45 chapter 22 . 3/30/2023
A decoy Bellatrix?! I LOVE IT! I wonder if the real Bella was attracte to Remus in her youth? Maybe she still carries a torch for him? ;)
Fellbane chapter 23 . 6/10/2022
The fic started off promising but as the story continues, there is less about Harry, his bonded and their relationship and increasingly more trivial exposition about topics the reader cares little for. Such as the Queens attire, her scepter and crown or the muggle military equipment. Is this Harry Potter and his Veela or is it basic training for the British armed forces in the mid 90s?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2022
Its too early to judge but base on dumbly's expression seems like he's not that manipulative i guess?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/12/2022
Vo
Th 1998 chapter 2 . 4/25/2022
Look, I know this is a very old story no one is going too look at anymore but it is still a point that almost no of those bond ff's speak about. It's really fucked up towards the bonded, '''stay with this girl or cause her unbearable pain'' is one of the harshest forms of emotional blackmail, especially when the girl in question didn't activity choose the bond and therefore can't really be held accountable. Like imagine someone put some random ass girl in front of you and went ''she is your lover now forever, or you could leave her, which of course would make her go insane and most likely die as result but hey, it's your choice''
Rodenrock chapter 7 . 4/16/2022
Super forced and rushed which is annoying, this felt like it had potential to be a good Veela bond book but now three days after getting Harry is already proclaiming his love for Gabrielle.
kageknuser2710 chapter 10 . 12/15/2021
This last part was dumb as hell. The Statute of Secrecy? Fuck that. Nono, the muggle queen decides everything. This was badly executed. You shouldn't have involved the muggles.
G.M.B.S chapter 11 . 10/25/2021
Nice story, only one thing: Beretta is Italian and not French.
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