Reviews for You'll See
DetectiveLillyRush chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
ooooooohhhhh that was hot! You deffinatly right good smut. :D I love how lilly realizes she wants to do it again lol
LunaDewdrop chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
definatly love it, very smutty but all good love L/S
SelenityCosmos chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Oh, I do love this pairing... and Serenity...
Solia chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Very hot :P

I know that's not a very constructive or helpful comment but I don't think you need one. This is great already.

Cable Addict chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
GAH! This was adorable! *favorites* Now if only something like this had happened/happens for real...
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Amazing story! Absolutely perfect! I really enjoyed it! Very intense! Wow!
springdreaming chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Loved it! Hot and descriptive- It flowed well and kept the reader glued! Also caught the Firefly reference- MAN I love Mal when he says that line!
Ebony10 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Yay 'next time'! *grin*

Very cute. I love this line:

"Her cheeks are flushed, and suddenly Scotty never wants anyone else to see her like this."
dearest penny lane chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
a one shot? really? :(

really, really?
ViolaLucien chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Wow, just came back from Frankfurt and the first I see is the mail alert that tells me that FloatingAmoeba has written a M-rated story. Really, really smutty! Those two are just too hot together and I really can imagine them being passionate and, well, dirty. *big grin* Writing smut with them is so(o)o great. Maybe next time Scotty can speak some Spanish? *giggle*
lulubell6 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
What a great story! So so HOT! I loved it!
acciosilverdoe chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Gah, people should point out the lack of Lilly/Scotty smut more often :P No, seriously, I promise not to say that in every review I leave. Almost.

Anyway, I really liked that they were still them in this, as in Scotty was still not sure if Lilly was going to fight him off, and she was still hesitant. Well, for a little while, because her being hesitant didn't exactly last :P

'Her cheeks are flushed, and suddenly Scotty never wants anyone else to see her like this.' -Perfect.

Hope you're OK x
cyn23 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
hey, great story, i love it, giggle
csilover12 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Loved it plz make a chapter 2
fiesa chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Hi joey!

I'm sorry I didn't get to read the new chapters of Somebody like us - but seeing the release of a one shot, I just had to read it quickly!

Thanks to you, I know what "smut" means (there are some words you just don't learn in school or during three months abroad)... As always, your style is amazing and the story really good. I would have loved to know what the hell it was what made Scotty barging through Lil's front door like that, but now he'll enter more carefully, I guess, and it's the final result that's important, anyway...

What was most striking are the lapses in tenses... Quite interesting to read. The world is spinning! And neither one of my favourite characters is thinking straight. I like past tenses most, but it doesn't really matter here. Moreover, your choice of the point of view was interesting. Neither Lil's nor Scotty's...

A great story, as always. My respect!
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