Reviews for The Twilight of Your Life: Outtakes
Audrey Grey chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
nice
adnamay chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
I LOVED this! I think you did a great job portraying Tyler's POV! I'd also be cool if it were a little bit longer so that we could see his perspective on Jacob with Bella.
bandmum chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
This is fabulous!

I laughed and snorted through the whole thing!

Poor Tyler! He was so very clueless, for so long. I love his opinion of the Volvo and that he applies the lessons he's learned from his football coach. I'm glad he went ahead to the prom, too. He did't seem the type to lie down on the first hit.

Good voice! This worked well in first person.

Thanks for the dedication. That was sweet!
TheLadyJane chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Wow, Jen, I LOVED it! I smiled through the whole thing & laughed a lot! I work with teenagers and you did a pretty good job getting into his head! Seriously. The things I overhear sometimes . . . lol. Well done, bb! Thanks for sharing it with us! I'm glad you took us all the way through him going to the prom & seeing Bella & Edward together. And then, I loved his reaction & thoughts about how they looked together. That was beautiful.
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