Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
Lyra.Cryk chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Ugh, Desmond, seriously!
unflourescent chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Are you going to continue this? It's awesome. Please, please, please write more.
SomeoneFromWarriorsFanficWiki chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
You suck
LupineSerpent chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wonderfully dark. Like how they interact with each other.
Arybella chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 first the title made me think of Dance in the Dark by Lady Gaga and that's why I clicked on it. And then I started reading it and it didn't remind me of Dance in the Dark much, but oh my I'm babbling about Lady Gaga when I should be reviewing. Whoops. My mind wanders this late at night.

So, I liked the quote at the beginning. It set the mood pretty well. And the characters were cool. Different. Interesting conversation. I like Des more than Koeset. Not sure why.

Now I'd love to leave a longer review, but I'd probably end up babbling on and on about the latest station I made on my Pandora or how Chuck Norris rocks and...whoops doing it again so I'll end it here by saying good start and waiting to see what happens.
Wingwind the Wise chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Your story has a lot of potential! I really like it. Your style is good, and Des has lots of personality. Keep up the good work!
electric gurrl chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
That was dark and dangerous but I liked it. I've always kind of thought about the demigods that were a little more bent about the camp and everything. It was well written too. I liked it and I'm glad I read it.
xXXxXxXxxGpaxxXAxxXxxxxxX chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I admit, it was...GOOD. Write more. Please. You're not my favourite, but hey, I'm just here to read.
PennyOfTheWild chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
*shivers* Well. That was ... dark. Deliciously dark, but dark nonetheless. You have managed to create a sense of atmosphere that not only envelops, but claims. *shivers again*

It's nice to see a story about the children of the minor gods and goddesses - and even nicer to see one about Titan supporters.

And I absolutely love the characterization of both Des and Koeset (Koeset is Hebrew, I think? - what does it mean?) - it's refreshing, after all of the horrible sappy stories I've read (for lack of anything better) on this site. I applaud you on their creation.

bombplaya3 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
pretty good, I'll admit.

Still don't like you very much, but I have two stories that I actually would like you to review.

Before my eyes


SisterGrimmErin chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
You know I love every single part of it. I came up with the theme quote for God's sake, girlie. XD I love your OCs, your slash, your everything. And your spoilers! You rule.

I wish I wasn't so montonous. When you get more up, I promise to post a super-long, -cuts-it-off review all right luvs?
Deleted84493 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009

I love it, I'll review more fully next time, sorry, my eyes are almost shut here

Update super soon


Element Wolf chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Nice job! :) Not much else to say...
Caramel Kryptonite chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
-insert epic squee here- OMG, it's up! Yay! We must start working on the second chapter. Like ASAP. Oh! And sorry I wasn't much help with the erm... summary. Right, forgot what it was called for a sec. I'm going to PM you an idea I had on BT. Or next time we chat. Whichever comes first.

Anyways, happy to see Des and Koeset here. I love seeing OCs develop like that. Des is one of my favorites. Like, ever.

And yes, I had a lot of caffiene this morning. GO ICED TEA! Kay, I can;t wait till you get on MSN to chat. -stalks MSN- :)
The Bagel of Justice chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
This looks great, Aish. Update soon, please. I do want to know what happens!

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