|Reviews for Dancing in the Dark|
| Lyra.Cryk chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Ugh, Desmond, seriously!
| unflourescent chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Are you going to continue this? It's awesome. Please, please, please write more.
| SomeoneFromWarriorsFanficWiki chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
| LupineSerpent chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wonderfully dark. Like how they interact with each other.
| Arybella chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Hmm...at first the title made me think of Dance in the Dark by Lady Gaga and that's why I clicked on it. And then I started reading it and it didn't remind me of Dance in the Dark much, but oh my I'm babbling about Lady Gaga when I should be reviewing. Whoops. My mind wanders this late at night.
So, I liked the quote at the beginning. It set the mood pretty well. And the characters were cool. Different. Interesting conversation. I like Des more than Koeset. Not sure why.
Now I'd love to leave a longer review, but I'd probably end up babbling on and on about the latest station I made on my Pandora or how Chuck Norris rocks and...whoops doing it again so I'll end it here by saying good start and waiting to see what happens.
| Wingwind the Wise chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Your story has a lot of potential! I really like it. Your style is good, and Des has lots of personality. Keep up the good work!
| electric gurrl chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
That was dark and dangerous but I liked it. I've always kind of thought about the demigods that were a little more bent about the camp and everything. It was well written too. I liked it and I'm glad I read it.
| xXXxXxXxxGpaxxXAxxXxxxxxX chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I admit, it was...GOOD. Write more. Please. You're not my favourite, but hey, I'm just here to read.
| PennyOfTheWild chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
*shivers* Well. That was ... dark. Deliciously dark, but dark nonetheless. You have managed to create a sense of atmosphere that not only envelops, but claims. *shivers again*
It's nice to see a story about the children of the minor gods and goddesses - and even nicer to see one about Titan supporters.
And I absolutely love the characterization of both Des and Koeset (Koeset is Hebrew, I think? - what does it mean?) - it's refreshing, after all of the horrible sappy stories I've read (for lack of anything better) on this site. I applaud you on their creation.
| bombplaya3 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
pretty good, I'll admit.
Still don't like you very much, but I have two stories that I actually would like you to review.
Before my eyes
| SisterGrimmErin chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
You know I love every single part of it. I came up with the theme quote for God's sake, girlie. XD I love your OCs, your slash, your everything. And your spoilers! You rule.
I wish I wasn't so montonous. When you get more up, I promise to post a super-long, -cuts-it-off review all right luvs?
| Deleted84493 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
I love it, I'll review more fully next time, sorry, my eyes are almost shut here
Update super soon
| Element Wolf chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Nice job! :) Not much else to say...
| Caramel Kryptonite chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
-insert epic squee here- OMG, it's up! Yay! We must start working on the second chapter. Like ASAP. Oh! And sorry I wasn't much help with the erm... summary. Right, forgot what it was called for a sec. I'm going to PM you an idea I had on BT. Or next time we chat. Whichever comes first.
Anyways, happy to see Des and Koeset here. I love seeing OCs develop like that. Des is one of my favorites. Like, ever.
And yes, I had a lot of caffiene this morning. GO ICED TEA! Kay, I can;t wait till you get on MSN to chat. -stalks MSN- :)
| The Bagel of Justice chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
This looks great, Aish. Update soon, please. I do want to know what happens!