Reviews for Focus
Charlie Girl 79 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Good job. You nailed the banter between the brothers and the totally distracting nature of llamas.
lunasgathering39 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
That cracked me up! You captured them so well in only 100 words. I could easily see this conversation happening. Great job and keep writing!
Muffy Morrigan chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
This was just awesomeness. Pure awesomeness. I love a llama more than almost anythi... Hey was that a llama? No, no, it was a crow... Anyway, this was awesome, wonderful and I could so hear Dean in my head!

Five Impalas, freshly waxed, lovingly detailed cruising down the road and...hm. is that a llama in back?
Phx chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Absolutely awesome and so, very Dean and TraSan :P

Great dialogue and I can't help but feel Sam's pain here - Dean does have the concentration of a... well.. a llama!

I bet the Llama's name was George...

You did your mamma proud!
CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Haha! Now Dean's really acting like Jimmy Neutron's buddy (forgot his name) who's really obsessed with llamas. Nice! Love it!
Linnie McCary chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Aha, so the writing bug AND the SN interest seem to run in the family! Welcome to fanfic, grr580.
TraSan chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
LOL!

Llamas!

Well, there WAS a llama there. Sheesh.

Cute drabble.