Reviews for Oh, Inverted World
blackRoses15 chapter 12 . 3/16/2010
Love your story please contineue it soon!
avecamour3 chapter 13 . 3/1/2010
I read your story a while ago (and re-read it) and knew once I had an account I had to review it. You've done a beautiful job. I have to say that I love this Edward, and you made it really easy to feel for him. Guilt is definitely a killer, especially the sort that no one else believes is yours to bear since at that point it seems like the more you're told that you're good the more you know that you rightfully deserve the punishment that no one else will really give you and that you must give yourself. You depicted that so well. I’m glad Bella is understanding of him and patient with him (also, awesome job with her character. It’s nice to see her as a confident person).

I'm about to start at a Catholic school, and I like to imagine there is a priest like Father Corwin there. I love the relationship you depict him having with Edward. It’s sweet, and I’m glad he’s there for him and sees what Edward doesn’t see in himself.

Again, this is an amazing story. The entire thing is excellent (the characters, the dialogue, the Latin, the religion, Edward’s growth, and, again, just everything).
shandi25 chapter 13 . 2/26/2010
OMG left me right before the limonade OUCH I am hot and bothered now... NO

kapap chapter 13 . 2/21/2010
Hi! I really loved your story, I found it yesterday and I couldn't stop reading it. I hope that you come back soon.

Ban Literate Union members chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
A forum causing a censorship crusade on FF called "Literate Union" is reporting twilight fics they deem not up to par with their standards, those that are offensive, indecent, and objectionable to them. They have made themselves the self proclaimed FF police.


2 of the ppl who run it are "Kittysaurus" forum./forum/Literate_Union/61196/


"Ever heard of a Dictionary"


Other moderators of this forum:

“Bitter Sea Light”

“Lord Kelvin”

“Vivex Leirith”

they have posts on their forum asking for links to stories that ask them to go post flames as reviews then they report them

they have a list of stories that they are against, those with sexual content, and have listed the ones that they have been successful in getting removed.

they have asked underage readers to read M rated fics and then have them report it to FF

They also harass and cyber stalk the authors that they carry the vendetta against. Such as "cullenxvamp" among many others, including attacking the author’s children and family members

they seem to be targeting mostly twilight stories and authors

Please pass along this message however you can and lets stand up against them and let fanfiction know that we will not tolerate their actions and behavior. The action of removing stories should be left to the fanfiction moderators and not this group of children/self proclaimed critics/fanfiction police. Please help support the freedom to unleash our imagination! Email fanfiction and ask that this group be stopped and report their actions. Thank you for your help and support!
Ban Literate Union members chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
A FF Forum on a censorship crusade against Twilight Authors and their stories called Literate Union argues that the material in the stories that they oppose and object to is offensive, indecent, and objectionable. Yet, fanfiction’s TOS state that each person may be exposed to that kind of material and they waive any rights. These people have no right to police the stories on fanfiction and report them numerous times in one day just because the information was offensive, indecent, and/or objectionable.

The icing on the cake of this group is that they consider themselves above the rules and regulations that they attempt to enforce. The co-founder, Georgeasaurus(now Kittysaurus), had a swastika on his profile which falls in with the hate crimes under FF Terms of Use. And, one of their members, NaLaaSt has a pornographic story posted.

These people, these self proclaimed literate people, need to be stopped and their actions ceased. They have targeted a number of fanfiction authors and are attacking them through organized mass emails to the members asking them to contact the author and leave mean comments on their reviews and in private messages, and they repeatedly report the stories they deem unacceptable. One member even admitted to reporting a story over 25 times in a few days. That is harassment and stalking and should not be acknowledged or allowed.

Many popular authors have had to pull their stories or have had them deleted because of the Literate Unions actions. These authors are moving to other site and pulling large numbers of readers with them. This is taking away from and will continue to happen if the Literate Union is allowed to continue with their actions and forums and profiles.

The main fandom that the Literate Union targeted is the Twilight community. The Twilight community has been involved in numerous fund raisers including Fandom Gives Back for Alex’s Lemonade Stand and The Haiti Compilation where over $80,0 was raised for Haiti Earthquake Relief. I was one of those authors who participated. The Twilight community has a voice and we do make a difference.

Stop the Literate Union. Delete their forum and let the people on fanfiction rest easy that they will not be targeted unnecessarily. The Literate Union even has a list of stories in a thread on their forum that they are working to have removed. They are acting like the Nazi Regime and should not be allowed to continue with their actions. If they continue then will lose many loyal authors and readers.

Fanfiction is our home; please do not let us be run out of it by some bullies masking themselves as the Literate Union.
twilightheaded23 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
this story is beautiful! I can't even tell you how much i LOVE blushing Edward! Such a good idea and so perfect for his character! The strong Bella is also a wonderful change. It's nice to see her take charge ever once in a while.

I really really really like the religion factor as well. It adds an entire level of awesomeness to the story. And normally it can be such a touchy thing, but you've written about it spectacularly. Bravo!
cullenblackfan chapter 13 . 2/9/2010
ah i hope you will finsh it please!
sherryola chapter 13 . 2/5/2010
Hi, i really love the story. It has beauty and tenderness. love both edward and bella, and of course the other, Alice, Emmett and Jasper. I really like that it is all from Edward's point of view.
sharybobbins chapter 13 . 2/4/2010
ahh! major cliffhanger, come back soon!
sharybobbins chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
interesting story, cant wait to read more!
wandererlt chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
Squee... I so love the role reversal, keep up your pure awesomeness!
wandererlt chapter 3 . 1/30/2010
Oh WOW, this story is fantastic!
wandererlt chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
I am so sorry, but I didn't catch that last part... Can you repeat in english please?
wandererlt chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
So far it is really good. I love that Edward is still a V, and somewhat not embarrased by it...
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