Reviews for Kinder
TeamAroPickle chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Good story but there are a few problems:

1) you spelled his name wrong- it's Oskar- you know the Germans, always putting a "k" instead.

2) Oskar schindler demanded sex from the women of the families who wanted to be freed, and a lot of women had to make sexual sacrifices to save their husbands and children- he's not as good a man as people say. :(
FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
great story, :) just didn't like the part about no one deserving death, and I'm sure Oskar would agree, he's Catholic ;) please write another chapter!
Sara-Lena chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
I liked your story a lot and it was well written. But I think you made a mistake when you tried to write in german. What does "Seines in Ordnung weniger einer" mean?
rutger5000 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Very well written. I would like to say more, but I can't come up with anything else.