Reviews for Black Plague: The Diary of Jane
cherry.rose.salinas chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
Please update this a great story so far
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Please update soon the story's great
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Very good you should keep it going
Jane of Volterra chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
really well written :)

keep it up, it was great, i really enjoyed it!
caww chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Well if looks could kill..I guess has new meaning...with Jane being mad at Storm.

caww
kerryfofo chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
nice begining!

im not much of a writer so i dont have much advice

except to keep up the great work!

:D

kerryfofo
IcelandGirl812 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Erica liike. :D It's not in-depth historical-ness to the point where it makes my head spin just imagining the research someone did, but it's enough to make me feel like I'm there.

I've never liked horses, for the record. I really like this though. It's interesting to read because I've never read anything like it. If it were farther along, I'd nominate it for "plot you wish you came up with" in the Bellies. :P

It's a bit of a short prologue so...not much else to say. But, I did have a question.

"She saw red and didn't know if it was because of her anger, or just the visual remaining her her head of the blood covering her brother's face."

The part beginning with remaining, made no sense to me...Was it supposed to be something else? Or is it just the double "her" that's confusing me?