Reviews for Rising Powers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this story, I was so invested. Absolutely gutted when I realised it wasn’t finished. |
![]() ![]() Lost interest once they got to Hogwarts. Poorly written once they arrived. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable read, hope you can finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love stories in which the characters invent things; especially when their inventions are the result of careful and creative thinking about the fundamentals. I've always wondered why Naruto never tried to work out the parameters and limits of the Shadow Clone. Can he form them behind a wall? Can he make them last longer? Can he materialize one inside a person, making them explode? This is a pretty good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Trees are androgynous" Well, they could be, or not. "Monoecious” is translated as “single house,” meaning that male and female flowers are found on a single individual. This contrasts with the translation of dioecious, which is “double house.” This means that male flowers are on one plant and female flowers are on another plant." Oaks however . . . "Oaks and many other trees are monoecious. This means that both the male (staminate) and female (pistillate) flowers are on the same tree." |
![]() ![]() ![]() well that's just great no update in 8 sodding years... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for a really great read so far. Would love to see more of this. Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neville is really really pushy about including Ron Weasley. I am not so sure and feel that Ron needs to prove himself. He did do better during an emergency where Neville and Hermione froze. I wonder of that is sny indication of the future. Hogwarts says there are dixbut we don't know who the othet five are. It is extremely likely that Hermione is the second. Neville may be (50 percent chance) the third. Ron Weasley might be a fourth but also might not (10 percent chance). While Sorting Ron, Hogwarts says there are two (possible candidates) after Ron. If it is in reverse alphabetical order, who knows. If not, there are fewto no students after Ron. In the next year, there are Luna Lovegood and Ginny Weasley. What we know is that Dumbles wanted them all in Gryffindor, and that the Hat was not entitely happy with Harry, Neville, and Ron all choosing Gryffindor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story! I hope to read more of it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok made it through all you've written and then saw this hadn't been updated in years makes me sad I was really loving this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK you were mixing things up during the sorting they had both already read Hogwarts of history and Harry and Hermione can you return invisible so why the invisibility cloak there’s quite a few things like Hermione‘s personality changed she was better in the first chapters but now it’s like she’s more like the movie version then the version I was reading up till now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story, author. And keep writing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love to read more of this tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ruined the story by sharing his power. just like every story that shares power. him doing it makes him different/important, him showing everyone and their moms meaning every could do it but the 8 year old figured it out. stupid |