Reviews for Finality
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Very sweet story. Poor Bakura suffered a lot. Ryou, too.
Nyahnyan chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
so sad. i am sorry i kind of got lost in the story but i was very job!
Erik's Champion chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I'll copy what everyone else has said by saying that I really like the dialogue. You convey a lot of feeling in very words. It's sweet but also very sad
adele4 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Oh, this was sweet. Love how awkward it is, how they don't quite manage to talk to each other, but understand, more or less, anyway.

And the last two paragraphs are lovely, especially the bit about him seeing but not feeling him, and Bakura's lost name...

(You should post it on fic on demand, you know; requests can be filled more than once.)
YugiTheKing chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Endearingly sweet. Very nicely written. Hope you keep writing!
HanChan chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
You said a lot in very few words. You really got across the awkwardness of the situation and the sentiments behind every action. And it was a good ending.
HolyMetalMuffinOfDeath chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
This story is utterly perfect. 10 stars.