Reviews for Selfportrait
BillThomas chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
So, is this considered sex, or masturbation?

First off, Good job!

I really like this story, as evidenced by my reviewing (something I don't do often). It has humor, action (read sex), and it's really just an all around fun little story. I really do hope you add on to this, or at least have some more adventures with Xela, she seems (to me, at least) to be sort of an opposite, smarter Alex, and I would love to see some more of her. Of course, I understand if you don't, and I will still gladly re-read this story many times.

Thanks for writing, and again, good job,

Bill Thomas
chris789 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
that was awsome kep on going
iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
WOW i like it though

valll chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
again i love your work. its captivating and written beutifully. i hope ya do a story one day instead of a one shot. but either way im a huge fan. :) keep it cominng.
Alexawynters chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Ok first off: lol. this story in general. Completely original, i love it! I think you got Alex's personality perfect, and the dialogue. I'm so amused. just fyi.

Second: wow.. omnom tasty story lol

I mean really, this was awesome. it was funny, hot, in character, and just all around good. good job. lolz
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