|Reviews for Thousands of Masks|
| yukicrewger2 chapter 7 . 10/11/2016
| Angel Thera chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
This is good. I hope it isn't abandoned as i really want to see more of this.
| Eurigos chapter 9 . 1/22/2014
| Nicanna chapter 9 . 10/31/2013
ahh... that was interesting.
| Nicanna chapter 5 . 10/31/2013
hmm ok i was one chapter early. here was the OOC warning :P
the OOCness should be bearable, though like a said before, some of naruto should shine through, especially when he gets close to his friends and becomes more relaxed around them.
the thing that irks me the most is that naruto seems to have forgotten all his shinobi training (i, ugh, read up to chapter 7 before skipping back here in response to your AN). those kinds of things stay with you, especially when you're suddenly thrust into a life-threatening situation. you react before you think.
then again, it might just be me itching for more ninja action.
just asking, but what happens to naruto's chakra? is it equivalent to SP? are are they separate?
| Nicanna chapter 4 . 10/31/2013
nice idea. their defection was logical, except for the fact that the council would allow konoha's jinchuriiki to leave the village ( but i'll ignore that because this really is a good crossover idea ). i honestly wonder sometimes how they can stand to be there. does this make them missing-nin btw?
though, i feel that the naruto's character is quite off. i dislike the fact that naruto is so stoic; it doesn't seem possible for that hot-headed naruto to transform into someone else in just two years. he should still keep some of his old characteristics, like smiling more often or at least replying to junpei. hinata is alright. i like that she grew a backbone - she had a logical reason to do so - though it would be better if you could have done it more gradually.
also, the fight scene. i'm pretty sure naruto would have kept some of his survival instincts during a fight. his first thought should be subduing the enemy, ensuring safety, rather than honing his new ability. i at least expected some ninja action in there, at least enough for SEES to realize that naruto isn't normal :P
one last thing: please, please deviate the text from canon. i'm sure everyone on this site has read through those same lines more than once and it's infuriating to read it all over again. naruto should NOT be minato from the game. he is a different person. a crossover story is one that mixes the ideas of two fandoms together. here, you're mixing the characters. naruto's character should carry over to the persona world.
this story is good. it has a lot of potential. i like the way you included the konoha 11, ans sasuke's feelings about this, but the thing you need to keep into account is that you are also adding SHINOBI into HIGH SCHOOL. you can't keep it to just one fandom, you have to utilize the shinobi methods as well as persona. when it comes to fighting, this issue will be more prevalent.
i wish you the best of luck in your endeavor.
p.s. you have issues here and there with your grammar (practically the most confusing thing about english; i don't blame you). i suggest getting a beta for now because these issues are not to result of carelessness, rather it's that you don't understand the sequence of a sentence :P you'll get the hang of it in the future, though. just take's practice.
| kagemoto chapter 9 . 6/5/2013
| kagemoto chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
dun dun duuuuuuuuuuun! hah very nice
| Ashia21 chapter 9 . 10/11/2012
Its Awesome! Please update soon!
| Sprig chapter 9 . 7/20/2011
oohhh so this is an interesting story. hmm wonder how sasuke would feel bout itachi and naruto being close...will sasuke finally learn the truth of the uchiha masscre? (yea i know i spelt it wrong)
| Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
| TiFu chapter 9 . 4/18/2011
This story's great! I really hope you'll continue to the end!
| Cloves chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
| Kithrin chapter 9 . 12/22/2010
Nicely done, are you going to mostly skip over the day to day dating sim part of the game? If not the fic could become really cumbersome.
| Still Not Dead Yet chapter 9 . 12/12/2010
Naruto once again flaunts his relationship with lady luck.
An intriguing meeting with Itachi too.