|Reviews for I Want to Taste Your Chapstick|
| Bondomu chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Ooh, you've made me hungry! I wish I could taste L! I LOVE chocolate covered strawberrys! :D
| SoraVun chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
AWW!so sweet & yummy,luv ur writing style
- Elaine -
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Aww, how cute. L would be up front in Light's face like that. I love how Light is so freaked out at first then when it realizes he likes it he, along with L, is coming up with any possible reason to continue kissing. "Perhaps a second opinion is necessary," L advised sagely.
Light grinned. "Of course."
Still my favorite part has to be the last two lines.
"Light grinned. "You know, I do have some strawberry chapstick lying around somewhere."
L's eyes widened. "Put it on immediately. I must test it thoroughly." He smiled knowingly at Light."
Ah, yes, strawberries-L's weakness. He'll be wanting to taste that one for some time.
Good work with this story.
| MoonlightM4gic chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Awe, cute funny and sweet :D
| The Black Reshiram chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
i was totally ROFLing the whole time i was reading this. i love the last two lines especially, and L's total bluntness to the situation
| obrilley chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Yes i believe raito's lips deliciously sweet chinamon
| L's Doppelganger chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Argh... [Don't throw a flame, don't throw a flame...] Okay, I did not like your take on this... Apart from this entire situation (Yaoi, I mean, if that wasn't clear) not being remotely realistic in the slightest, you could have put further effort in to capture their personalities...While I am not a fan of yaoi, it can be appreciated by me when it is written well. Sorry. It is just that it's one of my pet-peeves when an author completely manipulates the character into what they definately would not do. What I mean by that is, you could have made L go about things much more...'L-like' than you did. And secondly, please don't list it in the 'HUMOR' genre, as it is not humorous. I am trying to come up with something positive to say... Thanks for submitting a story. Remember, you can ignore this reveiw if you don't approve, but it is simply my perspective.
| Klappy chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Sweet. I'd have to try that Chapstick.
| I Am Light chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
This thing had me laughing all night long! I loved this thing, and I've read it so many times this evening... I swear, you are a genius. Later.
| RazorLike chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Haha! That was so clever ! Give it a try with shampoo too. There are many that smell like milk, banana, chocolate, papaya...
That'd be fun!
| ichigofan01 chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
lol, nice story!chapstick...
| Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
| SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
OH GOODNESS...XD THIS WAS AWESOME...XD
YAY CHAPSTICKS AND YAOI! XD
HMM...I WONDER WHERE THAT CHAPSTICK WILL GO...HM...XD
I MUST TO POST A FIC TOMORROW...XD
| 0mohni0 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Just like L to be so undercover about his sneaky motives...hehe...
| TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
... It's so adorable! ...
... XD ...
... I love it! ...