Reviews for Angel Series 1: Broken Angel
Guest chapter 23 . 2/20
The drug is HEROIN. HEROINE is the feminine form of HERO.
tinkerbellpatten chapter 4 . 2/16
She should tell Charlie that Jake's been hitting her. I'm disappointed that she kept that from him.
tinkerbellpatten chapter 3 . 2/16
Tell him that Jake gave her the shiner and Ed's gonna lose his sh-t
tinkerbellpatten chapter 2 . 2/16
Well that was unexpected.
This story moves at a fast clip.
tinkerbellpatten chapter 1 . 2/16
A good start to the story.

I hope she doesn't stay with an abusive person. I know that original Bella used Jake to help distract her from her heartbreak... But this is a bit too much to be worth it in my opinion. Personally I'd rather deal with a ragged hole in my chest from missing 'he who shall not be named' than dealing with the fear of physical abuse. Just my opinion.

A broken heart is bad enough. Hopefully she won't add a broken nose to the list of injuries.
clickpic chapter 1 . 12/20/2019
Stay strong, Bella!
Bookwormfanficlover chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
Third time reading! I love this series!
LaurelLeafSinger chapter 15 . 8/22/2019
The Cullens and Bella allowed Jacob onto their property despite warnings? They should have ripped him to shreds but they are all decent people compared to Jacob. Was Victoria in the woods? Jacob trying to get Bella alone for a walk in the woods? Don't think so! Why can't Edward hear their minds? And why would they ever leave Bella all alone to go hunting?! When Victoria was still on the loose? Would never happen. Bella's intuition is correct: do NOT trust Jacob.

Also, Billy and Charlie mending their friendship after Billy's insults and knowledge that Jacob was beating Bella doesn't sit well with me, sorry. Thank you for writing your story though. Really liked Bella throwing a glass at Tanya's head!
LaurelLeafSinger chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
Wow, so good to have Charlie stand up for Bella against Jacob!
LaurelLeafSinger chapter 4 . 8/20/2019
Jacob is an abuser, laying all the blame on Bella. He gets angry? It's Bella's fault. Classic abuser! And Charlie rolls right with it; "What did you say to make him mad, Bella?" Ugh! I really disliked Charlie always supporting Jacob. He'll be blaming Edward for the bruises before long. Jacob is dangerous!

Thanks for writing a story for us.
purpleC305 chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
Her pain... so palpable. Relatable. Heart breaks suck! That much I know.
abbyweyr chapter 10 . 7/17/2019
It is almost like the wolves temper rub off onto Bella. That did clear the air and Edward certainly deserved it. Hope that it is him that changes her and not Victoria.
abbyweyr chapter 8 . 7/17/2019
Good that Charlie heard Jake and is supporting Bella.
abbyweyr chapter 6 . 7/17/2019
Yes, a new phone is much needed. Good for sharing intel on pack with the Cullens.
abbyweyr chapter 5 . 7/17/2019
Nice Jasper / Bella moment
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