Well, Jake has really turned to the dark side, hasn't he?

Tanya wouldn't have been fisting his shirt and holding him that way if Edward was volunteering for the kiss. She was trying her best her best to break to break them up. She is a pro!

So. Jake FINALLY got it through his thick head that beating up on someone he loved was not the way to seduce any one...

Now they have to prepare everybody and everything.

Her dad took it better than I expected.

I hope they can handle what they are getting into. Jacob's temper and selfishness is why I don't usually like Jake at all...

Well, Edward's cover is blown now!

Is she headed to the meadow?

There are some plot holes but other than that I freaking love the way you wrote this! Such a compelling story and of course I love the graphic details! Thank you, starting the next one now!

I love your mention of Carlisle being quiet during his change, and your way more rational Edward,which I love! Such an amazing story so far, I’m enamored already and I know it’s a series which makes me feel so excited!

This story was already amazing. It's even better that you mentioned Mötley Crüe

Thanks for the story. I loved it!
Greetings from my beautiful Ecuador.
Adriu

Are you two fighting again?" Charlie asked, heading toward the living room. "Jake looked pretty mad. What did you say to set him off this time?"

What a terrible thing to say to your kid ... for a cop Charlie is pretty blind

Great thinking. Good writing . Nice change of Story while staying true to everything. Thanks for sharing.

One of the best story I've read!
It is beautifully written, full of great story lines, lots of intrigue and action with a touch of drama, and love so strong that you could drown in it. I'm sure I'll read this many more times. Thanks!