Reviews for A Dark Shadow Under The Moon
Thalion Estel chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
That was great! You did a really good job of writing Boromir. Wonderful!
lostsouloftheunderworld chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I would give anything to be able to write like you! This is really moving!
The Pearl Maiden chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Wow. Great piece. I enjoyed reading it:)
Hefeweizen chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
That was really good! I like the way you made a full story from just a few lines.
Lindale chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Beautiful imagery, and fleshing out of an event.

Fireblade's song chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
I love stories that fill in small story holes like this. It's not often you see stories with Boromir, which is kind of sad. As always, a wonderful story. _
Silivren Tinu chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This story definitely makes Boromir's words during the Council of Elrond come to life. I loved how you described the devastating effects the presence of the Nazgul had on horses and men alike. I also liked how you portrayed Boromir here, both his determination and reluctance to retreat and his concern for his brother. A great story, NiRi!
KyMahalei chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
This is such a dramatic bit of Tolkien history that I'm surprised it hasn't been often told before. You've done a nice job setting the tone and the pace of the piece. I can't wait to see what your Muse gives you next.
BM originally chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
You know, I've always wondered at that comment where Boromir states that only he, Faramir, and two others were saved by swimming. The numbers that were killed had to be staggering in that assault!

You did a wonderful job with this! Thanks so much for sharing it!