|Reviews for edward got drunk|
| TheLoveOfHate chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
i have no idea what is going on...Bella and Edward is extremely out of character and i can't tell if Edward is a vampire or human (vampires aren't affected by alcohol yet Jacob refers to him as a leech)Also there isn't much of a description(just a string of dialog) i can't tell who's saying what. I didn't understand why anyone would say this is good. It kind of makes me wonder what people really think of my stories. I'm not asking you to stop writing especially if its something you like to do I'd rather you keep writing actually you can only get better that way. I'm just trying to be honest with you.
| Fleur'Elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Keep Writing this Is Amazing !
| Edward cullen is my hero chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
| pratly2 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
this is good, im waiting patiently for the next chapter!