Reviews for Miko and Shinigami Love
Jackalope89 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Not bad, really. Better spelling and grammar than what most people put out there. But there is one issue;
The talking parts. WAY to stiff and proper to the point it sounds more like robots than people. The best way to fix this is to simply think on how people actually talk, and then match the speech patterns to the respective personalities. Like Kagome would be polite, but not overly formal and Ichigo would be far more informal and, at times, rough sounding.
animecutylover chapter 26 . 1/9/2016
Woah. Kagome's realizing the truth, eh?
animecutylover chapter 25 . 1/9/2016
Woah. He is hot.
animecutylover chapter 24 . 1/9/2016
Kya! They kissed! Awww... :3
animecutylover chapter 23 . 1/9/2016
What? Another Espada? O-O
Wow. And he seems to be really cute too.
animecutylover chapter 22 . 1/9/2016
Wow. Why the heck is she fighting her memories? Is it too painful for her?
animecutylover chapter 21 . 1/9/2016
Wow. Kagome's really angry, it seems.
animecutylover chapter 20 . 1/8/2016
Kagome's getting her memories back little by little. Yay~! XD
animecutylover chapter 19 . 1/8/2016
More like a third chance.
animecutylover chapter 18 . 1/8/2016
Woah. Kagome's so calm here~! Lol.
animecutylover chapter 16 . 1/7/2016
Oh no! It'll be devastating for Koga to find out that Kagome is not really Kagome anymore!
animecutylover chapter 15 . 1/7/2016
Omg! What if that white bird is Midoriko?

Ooh! It seems the group also heard about the shard.
animecutylover chapter 14 . 1/7/2016
Aww...
It seems Kagome can still feel.
animecutylover chapter 13 . 1/7/2016
What?! Red eyes?! O-O
animecutylover chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
Noo!
Poor Kagome.
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