Reviews for Miko and Shinigami Love
Jackalope89 chapter 1 . 3/8
Not bad, really. Better spelling and grammar than what most people put out there. But there is one issue;
The talking parts. WAY to stiff and proper to the point it sounds more like robots than people. The best way to fix this is to simply think on how people actually talk, and then match the speech patterns to the respective personalities. Like Kagome would be polite, but not overly formal and Ichigo would be far more informal and, at times, rough sounding.
animecutylover chapter 26 . 1/9
Woah. Kagome's realizing the truth, eh?
animecutylover chapter 25 . 1/9
Woah. He is hot.
animecutylover chapter 24 . 1/9
Kya! They kissed! Awww... :3
animecutylover chapter 23 . 1/9
What? Another Espada? O-O
Wow. And he seems to be really cute too.
animecutylover chapter 22 . 1/9
Wow. Why the heck is she fighting her memories? Is it too painful for her?
animecutylover chapter 21 . 1/9
Wow. Kagome's really angry, it seems.
animecutylover chapter 20 . 1/8
Kagome's getting her memories back little by little. Yay~! XD
animecutylover chapter 19 . 1/8
More like a third chance.
animecutylover chapter 18 . 1/8
Woah. Kagome's so calm here~! Lol.
animecutylover chapter 16 . 1/7
Oh no! It'll be devastating for Koga to find out that Kagome is not really Kagome anymore!
animecutylover chapter 15 . 1/7
Omg! What if that white bird is Midoriko?

Ooh! It seems the group also heard about the shard.
animecutylover chapter 14 . 1/7
Aww...
It seems Kagome can still feel.
animecutylover chapter 13 . 1/7
What?! Red eyes?! O-O
animecutylover chapter 12 . 1/7
Noo!
Poor Kagome.
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