Reviews for Training
XxGirlyGamer36xX chapter 18 . 10/22/2017
Really good story, but you should stick to one tense so that the writing flows and the story doesn't get confusing.
Guest chapter 18 . 5/21/2017
This is amazing, wrote more
Blown chapter 18 . 5/19/2017
Omg I can't believe u updated it's been so long
Guest chapter 17 . 2/28/2017
Great so far
dorfchaosgenie chapter 17 . 1/1/2016
I love it! It is really funny and I want to read more :) give me moooore! Please?
Sparky199 chapter 17 . 8/8/2015
Love the story but...
Why are there lions in a forest in England?
(This is not meant as a spitful question)
Guest chapter 17 . 4/29/2015
Love it.
Crystaal chapter 17 . 1/1/2015
Lol dude this is really funny and unpredictable... MORE! plz
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 12 . 10/9/2014
Not a bad plot and everything but I would recommend checking your tenses. You keep switching between past and present, which is quite distracting. Other than that, this is going really well.
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
uh? it s good but a bit confusing!
ripper34 chapter 17 . 5/12/2014
Good story
MLM24 chapter 17 . 5/12/2014
Good chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
haha I'm just imagining how this getting Alex out of school method with a random person would totally not work in today's world. Well that's really sad also...

Anyway, is off to a good start. I'm pretty late, I guess seeing as you have 17 chapters already, but I'm looking forward to reading them all right now!
bubzchoc chapter 17 . 5/10/2014
Great chapter
serenityselena chapter 17 . 5/10/2014
escaping is not that easy for the three of them...
hope to read more soon :)
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