|Reviews for Gwen and Trent's magical night|
| salad-toes chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
(why is it that in certain sex fics, we always gotta describe penis length? :p)
...so, that happened?
It was passable smut. Nothing really stood out, and, in my opinion, it felt insanely rushed. Everything went by so quickly that I couldn't really get hot and bothered by this. Try taking your time to describe the scenery and interactions more next time.
Decent, but not paced or described well.
| Velawsumraptor chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
...well, that happened. Overall, good grammar and spelling. A
| Corner Mouse chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Meh, not really the best Trent/Gwen that I've read. I mean, it's okay; the writing was decent and the grammatical structure wasn't too bad. But it's not really that special. Nothing stood out; it was another PWP. Plus, you don't have to be specific about erection length. I know that's not much of a critique, but it makes the sentencing awkward.
Just saying, this wasn't all that good. Sorry.
| Cooleeo chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
This is awesome dude! U should totally make another GxT sex story!
| no one important chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
it must really suck when 'sheltered' people read these stories and comment them, huh? i mean, the story's rated M! it says so underneath the summary! i think this was awesome! damn, seriously, i got all jittery over it XD
it's actually hard writing these too. i tried to, but i kept getting embarrassed and giggly and just deleted it all ; this is detailed like a lot of stories have been, but it's also put in order, where some stories just jump all over the place. this is just right. the fact that it's short just amazes me. keep up the good work
| tdifreak55 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i know i just joined but DUDE its so wrong and ps the details were one word SICK!
| Kool Broadway Reader chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
| The Reviewer chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I can honestly say that this is my favorite Trent and Gwen story. It really gets into the passion that they have for each other. I like that a lot. Some of the other stories I've read bore me, but yours...yours wanted me to keep reading.
| veggiesandfruits chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
| The Ram's Brother chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
| hi chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
wow. just, wow.
| The Raccoon chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Beautiful, just beautiful
| I love Michael Jackson chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
M... it's been done. Do something less cliche next time.
Sorry, but it's true. Your story isn't really anything special.
| VampGrl1234 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
nice. that was really good. i never review to storied like this...but it was really good.
| alyssa chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Not that I'm complaining or anything, but you know what i really don't get? why do people go from saying Penis to the word Cock, just pick one or the other people! It IS the same thing anyway, I guess cock just sounds sexier, i don't know it only read this stuff, good job, a nice easy lemon. I like it