Reviews for Jail What?
Herperlo.D chapter 2 . 1/16
Mon dieu. This is so hot, you've just inspired me to write another smut fic. I reread this three times and it just gets hotter and hotter. Great job!
Yamamoto Akane chapter 2 . 5/16/2014
Oh my goosshh! A dom, bitchy little Cloud, urgh I looove that never read a dominant!Cloud before.. Usually he's the ultimate bottom..lol
Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
Day-um...Favorited, starred, marked on my calendar, and stored in my pornographic fantasies. I love you and thank you for all your hard work
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
ah fuck. Now that is awesome!
Sayonara7 chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Holy wow! One of the few Top!Cloud fics that I've actually liked xD I loved the way you wrote him, Seph and Zack!
DeletedNow624 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
This had to be the best short Yaoi I have ever read. At least so far. I refused to read Cloud top, until just now. Perfect. The set up, interrogation, everything.
spiel chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
Really nice and sexy story! :)

Only thing I didn't like was the name calling, but meh, that's just me. I know a lot of people find that a turn on ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
You have most likely commuted genocide ... of killing all the yaoi fans of the world... fucking nosebleeds left and right

THAT WAS FUCKING HOT
flame-of-strife-08 chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
holly hot damn *fans herself* i absolutely LOVE IT when cloud is dominant like that, i seriously love you for writing this,

it was wonderful!

/fav
Lion's Strife chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Holy shit, this is you too? I wonder why I never read the Boy Toy stuff over on AFF where I first read this little piece. Jesus I enjoyed the hell out of "Jail What?" the first time I read it! (And the second... and the third... and the... you get the idea _)

Lynsey, you are an amazing writer. I absolutely devoured the "Like you Want It" piece this afternoon. It's so incredibly good. You need a proofreader, but otherwise, wow!
pinkyblues chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
2nd last line, i think you mean 'role' instead of 'roll'?
ZackFair4ever chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Read this twice now and i still love it. All three of my favourite characters in one awesome story. All i can say is MORE!
Innocent Sinner in Hell chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
ok, so... before this, I would never have read a Seme!Cloud fanfic... but... I told myself I'd try, and hell... it's amazing...

Maybe from now he'll always be a seme in my mind... Hmm...

Fan-fucking-tastic! :D 5/5, totally going straight to my favs... :P

Hana-chan
Don Seira chapter 2 . 4/5/2010
hahaha that was funny and rlly hot! loved the ending!
Koure chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Oh my... O.O

That was AWESOME! You are an awesome writer... SemeCloud is hot!
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