Reviews for What Women Want
Musica Diabolos chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Aw, absolutely adorable! Just one grammar thing: he thrust the bouquet at her. But only because I'm picky.
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Aw! That was really pretty. Love Dean's quick thinking and appreciation of his reward :)
Swellison chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Sometimes light is good, a nice change of pace. I liked this, but I am wondering how old Dean is, for this to be his *first* kiss?

Sue
bhoney chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Aw, I LOVED this. Great job! (And yay for staying in the light! I love it there! LOL)

Loved the image of Dean "viciously uprooting bluebells, poppies and marguerites." Because yeah, he may be picking flowers, but he doesn't have to be happy about it. *snort*

Loved this too: "Trusting his instincts, with a speed that made her flinch, he thrusted the bouquet at her. And received his first kiss in return." First, I love that Dean's instincts are so dead-on where women are concerned, LOL. And I love that he got his first kiss in such a sweet, innocent way. And the last line was great too.

I'm favoriting this, really excellent job! Stay in the light! ;)
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