|Reviews for Filling the Gaps|
| ContraPoint chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Your writing style is very good.
And I love your Daniel :)
| MostVerbose chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
So fucking GOOD.
| Samu chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I enjoyed the imagery and intense tone of this. You did a very nice job keep me guessing whether Rorschach was completely fine or if Dan's worst thoughts were true.
| Hekateras chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
The tension and axiety were very well conveyed here. Excellent, really. Kept me on the edge of my seat. And it's believable. Needing co communicate the stress of a close encounter... It's touching without being mushy or out-of-character. Great work. :)
| Magnusrae chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Beautifully descriptive images, emotions that resonated off the screen, and a wonderfully plausible plot that depicted these two as in-character as can be. What more could a fan-fiction reader hope for? An excellent job!
| Kazuman21 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Don't think of me as weird... but I want to make love to your brain. Fantastic. You're the only writer who can keep me captivated without smut.
| teacrumb chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Perfectly delicious. o
| anon chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
i... love you. perfect portrayal of them. and the last line. *dies*
| Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
i love your little ficlets. :D
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
A bit of a panic attack there...
(Boy needs it, he does)
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Dear Anon Reader,
Why do you presume slash to be merely lust? Compassion and worry for an individual can as easily be love as friendship- that they both happen to be male doesn't preclude such an emotion.
| Jackie May chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
love this, just a beautiful little piece. the imagery was painfully vivid, and the characterization spot on.
| Anon Reader chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
It's disconcerting that the concern for the well being of another person, compassion and the worry for the safety of a friend can be construed as slash.
What has the world come to when there is nothing left but lust?
| Mistress-of-Misery chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
D: One of these days, your writing is going to give me a heart attack. The tension! The suspense! The feeling of relief when I find out that everything's all right after all! (it's like a drug, I swear)
I find Dan and Ror hopelessly endearing in this fic. Their relationship...is like a big patchwork quilt of actions and words unsaid, but it makes something when you put all the pieces together.
I love your style. 3 You've become one of my favorite writers, and I don't say that lightly. I'm now considering making a LJ account so I can stalk you better. xD;
| sepulchreangel chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Ok, best. thing. ever.
You described everything awesome, I could feel the panic coming off of daniel as he ran around looking for his friend who was running around looking for him. So tense. Though I have to say, if I were dan, I would've punched Rorschach in the face for making me worry. Good job :D