Reviews for Double Time Trouble
patricia.pc chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
Thanks for updating! I had to go back and re-read a few chapters to jog my memory but it was as enjoyable as the first time reading it. The story is original and funny so I Hope you continue with it, wherever the story takes you :)
Joel chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
I love how evil hermione is getting, stories like this where you pick a character to go crazy and try to take over the world are just great. She has her own evil army that uses babies for hockey pucks and everything.

There are bad guys in stories that aren't as evil as your good guys, I absolutely adore it.
LivingInTheClouds chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
Yay! Update! Great job, I love how you dealt with the headship and politics issues that resulted. Although, I honestly have to wonder what will happen when the Hermiones reach the age that they are sent their Hogwarts letters. It'll be interesting if nothing else. Are they even going to be at Hogwarts?
Kortir chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
haha, excellent! It's been a while since I've seen this update, and I'm really happy to see how it came out! Hermione Jane's response was hilarious, and what she did was excellent. Way to go. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it may be! You do amazing work, thanks so much for the great read.
Snowdove30 chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
Excellent update. So glad to this revived. Just when I think Dumbledore can't sink any lower, he does...
Michae1ange1o chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Good gracious, well this is a blast from the past. I thought I was seeing things in my email inbox.

Oooh I'm all happy now, something tells me the House of Granger is going to end up running the damn ministry at the end of it all, or at least the Wizengamot. A pity Dumbledore never recieved a love Pinapple too.

Your is actualy quite sinister, I never watched the modern movie as remakes tend to be quite shit, I'm used to the happy go lucky B&W movies. Good going.

Thanks for the update :) Lily and James conversation at the end is just so damn true and very, very well written.
FatesShadow83 chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
So glad you're continuing this!

Great chapter!
Flight of the Valkyries chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
I was surprised to see that this was updated. I can't wait to see what the St. Trinian girls boot camp is like or who Hermione allies herself with. Looking forward to the next chapter.
resplendeo chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Not to mention that, now that Lucius is dead, I rather doubt Hermione is going to have much trouble with getting into Malf- uh, Granger Library. What does she do with a larger knowledge base? And, after that- information network? Please? Hermione the Spymaster? ... it would be awesome ...
MisterQ chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
I am happy this story is being continued. Good to see the Trinians girls boot camped into a (loyal) fighting force - with magic. I do wonder what Snape is going to do now that he realizes that he has been working for two masters on the same side after hearing Dumbledoor announce that he was also a dark lord. Too bad there wasn't any nosy reported bugging that conversation, but there's still pensives.
jdboss1 chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
you are producing stories at an incredible rate

I just hope you don't tire yourself out.

I was really hoping this this storyone was going to be the next updated

(I'm one of your biggest fans) now on to the criticism)

I do find it irritating more than irritating actually how you just talk about events not actually show them in real-time

I would have really loved to have seen Hermione and politics in the chamber have all the meetings and so forth.

Quite a few authors would have had contents of this chapter over 10 chapters in real-time and in some ways I would love to see that sometimes it's too easy to finish his story to quickly and has there is hardly any good storys I haven't read yet it is harder and harder this website to entertain me I can spend hours searching for new stories and all I find it crap.

You are easily one of the best authors ever

My only major criticism about this story was in Chapter 11

I do accept that the death eater is a combat action and is a legitimate target but what really upsets me was Hermione acceptance of all the death and destruction around her as they massacred people one scene I think was the worst that really got me was this

A young girl presumably just graduated from the castle 17 18 years old clinging on tight to her young baby while being strung up and then having hur baby rips out of her hands stolen from a while she was left to die

A young girl presumably just graduated from the castle 17 18 years old clinging on tight to her young baby while being strung up and then having hur baby rips out of her hands stolen from a while she was left to die

This particular scene really made me feel quite nauseous

yes you could easily claim she was aware of what was going on but then being bought up and surrounded by something lessons the evilness plus what did she have individually done as an example

if you had a scene with her torturing somehow plus person then I think it would have gone down much much better

It's so easy for brave people to condemn those of us who are frightened and would of course carry out any request of somebody who is our life in their hands

As if I bumped into Hitler I would be the most politest gentleman ever intill I politely found an excuse to leave I would quickly emigrate but if I was able to leave then I would do whatever it took for the group I was caught up in not too hurt me

you are producing stories at an incredible rate

I just hope you don't tire yourself out.

I was really hoping this this storyone was going to be the next updated

(I'm one of your biggest fans) now on to the criticism)

I do find it irritating more than irritating actually how you just talk about events not actually show them in real-time

I would have really loved to have seen Hermione and politics in the chamber have all the meetings and so forth.

Quite a few authors would have had contents of this chapter over 10 chapters in real-time and in some ways I would love to see that sometimes it's too easy to finish his story to quickly and has there is hardly any good storys I haven't read yet it is harder and harder this website to entertain me I can spend hours searching for new stories and all I find it crap.

You are easily one of the best authors ever

My only major criticism about this story was in Chapter 11

I do accept that the death eater is a combat action and is a legitimate target but what really upsets me was Hermione acceptance of all the death and destruction around her as they massacred people one scene I think was the worst that really got me was this

A young girl presumably just graduated from the castle 17 18 years old clinging on tight to her young baby while being strung up and then having hur baby rips out of her hands stolen from a while she was left to die

A young girl presumably just graduated from the castle 17 18 years old clinging on tight to her young baby while being strung up and then having hur baby rips out of her hands stolen from a while she was left to die

This particular scene really made me feel quite nauseous

yes you could easily claim she was aware of what was going on but then being bought up and surrounded by something lessons the evilness plus what did she have individually done as an example

if you had a scene with her torturing somehow plus person then I think it would have gone down much much better

It's so easy for brave people to condemn those of us who are frightened and would of course carry out any request of somebody who is our life in their hands

As if I bumped into Hitler I would be the most politest gentleman ever intill I politely found an excuse to leave I would quickly emigrate but if I was able to leave then I would do whatever it took for the group I was caught up in not too hurt me

you could claim she had the ability to contact the ministry but then standing alone while you form a family and the dark Lord now wishes you snuff it quite an expensive choice to make not everybody is as independent and is brave of the heroes of stories it is so easy to have a fearless character who would stand alone that so many of us would keep our heads down and as long as it's not directed at us try our best not to be the next target

I feel she's a bit like bin Ladin's nine-year-old daughter

she witnessed her father being shot in the head on in handcuffs

should she be next?

Cannot really blame a new I know your personality majority of time I love reading it the way you express war and destroying your enemies but sometimes I feel you do get slightly cowered away in collateral damage

I really love the scene with the headmistress that was a classic giving her the thumbs up as she kidnapped the students to be tortured if it's as dangerous as you've shown why would these rebellious and murderous brats stick around to die this not like this a prison wall around them and the inmates are allowed to kill one another but then it is fiction and anything can happen

Think it's time now for My Gilded Life update pretty place
Kitiara Woodbane chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Another wonderful chapter!

I especially liked Hermione Jane becoming the next head of house, and what she said to that ministry official - the "Love Pinapples" - totally out of nowhere and rather funny.

One thing I am interested in however is what you meant by evolution and immortal souls being opposing theories. I don't suppose you would be willing to share your reasoning? I very much enjoy reading the opinions that you write into your stories, you have a very interesting perspective and your writing is very insightful.

Well, either way I look forward to reading the next chapter of whichever story you update!
Zelara chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Is anyone going to wonder why/how the granger family came to be connected/in charge of the malfoys? That sounds like something Dumbledore would want to check on, a sudden rise of a muggle family to pureblood prominence. Especially once Hermione starts using all that political power, probably against him.
Rob chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Thank you Thank You. A new chapter.

This story is a fun read. Keep it up.
Antigone's Sister chapter 12 . 2/27/2012
Hi Skysaber

I started reading this story a few months back, and I loved your unique version of a do-over. Also the inclusion of St. Trinians in a very different light than it is usually portrayed in was refreshing.

I do, like a few previous reviewers, have an issue with the end of the chapter. To say that anyone who thinks that evolution happened must necessary be a eugenicist is, and I apologise for my bluntness, ridiculous, but sadly you aren't the only one who thinks so, which is why I feel obligated to spend most of my review on this subject.

Evolution is a natural phenomenon studied by scientists, much like, say, the occurance of forest fires. Forest fires do happen on their own, and can have huge ecological benefits. They clear out brush which can crowd out and kill trees, they get rid of debris which prevents new trees from growing, and there are even some organisms which require the heat of a forest fire to germinate. Imagine a scientist who studies this: he believes it happens, he knows how it happens. He can predict how a forest fire will spread, in order to give out a warning to any people in the general area that might need to evacuate. He can provide instructions on how to control the fire so it doesn't get out of hand. He DOESN'T go around setting fires, especially in an area where anyone might get hurt.

Its the same with evolution. An evolutionist thinks evolution happens, can predict how organisms are going to evolve, and can give us advice on how to deal with this. A good example are the people who work on the flu shots and other disease control. Viruses and bacteria evolve FAST, since they can reproduce very quickly (often in 20 minutes). An evolutionary microbiologist will predict how they will evolve in the future, based on how they have been evolving in the past few years, and design what they think is the best shot possible to provide immunity. This, by the way, is why you need to get the flu shot every year, not just once. (As an aside, if you're a healthy young adult you really don't need it at all, but if you're elderly or get sick very easily, you do need it every year.)

In summary, believing something HAS happened, and knowing how, doesn't meen you think it should still happen. Consider, since you brought it up in the chapter, the Holocaust. You know it happened, and you probably have somewhat of an idea of the socioeconomic factors that made it happen. You might be able to replicate it. But I'm absolutely positive that just because you think it happened, and know why, that you're not going to start advocating the mass murder of Jews and undesirables.
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