Reviews for Double Time Trouble
saashi samy chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
interesting idea
Loner Kid chapter 7 . 1/8/2015
scary...3 hermiones...gosh I can't even stand one.
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Wow that's a surprising one! I wish you can just make the thoughts italics though, that makes it easier to read. Thank god Hermione managed to correct herself (and almost-corrupted mind)
keichan2 chapter 12 . 12/20/2014
“Why hadn't he done this before?” Oh… I just hope it will be one of his harebrained ideas, and not something really dangerous…

“Oh, Bravo! Bravo, Tom!” OK… I still can’t decide if it was a harebrained idea, or something really dangerous… (edit: as it turns out, not that dangerous…)

Thanks for sharing!

I would love to read more of this story!
keichan2 chapter 11 . 12/20/2014
“raised by a mother cat over the next six months or so” Oh? Didn’t they have a problem dispelling the clones after a measly one week? What would six months do?

I do have a question: With Lucius dead, and Narcissa “stoned out of her mind” (literally stoned, and literally out of her mind, by now… ;-p) what will happen?
The girls are the heiresses (if they find a way to off Narcissa without the elves stopping them…).
I do wonder how long before the three Hermiones learn about his death…
keichan2 chapter 10 . 12/20/2014
“So who was to say a magical adoption COULDN'T give a child magic?” Err… but she should only do THAT after being freed from the Malfoy name…

I do wonder who Dumbledore’s new minions are…
(and how many there are ;-p)
keichan2 chapter 9 . 12/20/2014
“Well, it's a good thing I put glasses on you so no one could be accidentally hurt by your gaze!” Bwahahahahaha!

I’ll notice that Jane was either influenced by the Malfoy curse, or by her school (and the school nurse) because the way she tested on those girls…

“putting covers on important books” Bwahahahahahaha! Priorities! ;-p

“carved a working wooden cuckoo clock” Bwahahahahahaha! (though, I think it would allow one to make a lot of money by selling them to tourists!)

Aah… I was wondering if you would have Jane just learn all she can, or if she would get help from the girls… I got my answer!
keichan2 chapter 5 . 12/19/2014
“It's signed by a paw print.” Bwahahahahahaha! Thanks for this one! :-D
keichan2 chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
“a rib from the boy in question.” Oh? Reminds me of something… ;-p
keichan2 chapter 3 . 12/19/2014
“Mistress demands Hermy clean her hairbrush or Hermy must iron hands” Bwahahahahahaha! Hilarious!
keichan2 chapter 2 . 12/19/2014
Most of this chapter was properly hilarious!

Thanks for sharing !
Guest chapter 12 . 12/15/2014
You can't believe in both souls and evolution? You are fucking stupid. Do you even know what soul means?
CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
please update soon!
Riz987 chapter 12 . 9/22/2014
Awesome Story!
Evani chapter 12 . 9/15/2014
I love this, I have to say I'm really glad I took the time to my gilded cage after reading part of Lionhearts partially kissed hero, because of I didn't I wouldn't have found your amazing work. I'm rather curious as to what's going to keep happening and how everything will end up, so pleeeaaasssee update? It would be so very kinda and amazing of you hah
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