Reviews for Brothers
Oo-Violetmoon-oO chapter 6 . 9/17/2009
Aww... they're so cute! I don't blame you for not being able to leave them alone.
NinjaSmashley chapter 6 . 9/17/2009

No seriously. It was cute and pointless, but loverly and well written.
Aster Selene chapter 6 . 9/16/2009

I imagine Osamu would be too caught up with studying to sleep though. :(
SugarSpiral chapter 5 . 9/14/2009
...I don't like TK and Matt as much as Sam and Ken :)

It was still cute though.

Please don't be entirely through with Sam and Ken *looks cute*
SugarSpiral chapter 4 . 9/14/2009
Na-cat chapter 5 . 8/28/2009
All these deabbles are brilliant, and so cute too. I love how you write Ken as a little kid, and Matt as a grumpy one!
Oo-Violetmoon-oO chapter 5 . 8/26/2009
Cute. There's no better way to bond than figuring out a tent.
90MLLu chapter 5 . 8/14/2009
Oh how sweet. Where do you get these sweet plots from? They are totally amazing. I like your wordings to... Hihi Izzy glued to his laptop... That's pretty funny(v)

Nice little drabble. Do more of these or you could maybe try Tai and Kari as well(v)

Great job!(v)
243Ash chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
Oh, T.K. and his nonsense .. how will they ever have an adventure...

wait, wtf? Snow?

lawl .. nice chappy

Sorry to be Debbie Downer, but this kind of lacks a lot of the emotion you've put in some of your other chaps. I know you can do it )
starnet chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
this isn't so bad, short stories in every chp, but, you got my attention. can't wait for the another chp
Aster Selene chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
Hate to burst your bubble but there are several plot errors...

* The camp was a school trip. However, Takeru visited Yamato's house and saw he was going to camp and wanted to go too, which became a grueling issue because their dad had to call his ex-wife and get permission, and then get permission from the school, yada yada yada...

* Takeru and Yamato never saw Mimi or Koushiro or anyone else UNTIL the snow came in; then they found a nearby shrine (common in camps) where they saw five other kids huddling *ahem*...

All info taken from the Digimon Adventure novels...

Otherwise it was cute. And Takeru has premonition. xD
Potgenie chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
Not exactly how I'd imagine it, but this is a really sweet and sad little scene. :(

Can't wait to read about TK and Matt! (YAY, I didn't know you were gonna write about them too! *beams excitedly*)
NinjaSmashley chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
Wow - “Where is he anyways?”

“He’s in a better place, Ken.” She kissed the top of his head as he frowned.

“What was wrong with here?” -

Wonderful chap. Please don't give up on writting about Ken and Sam. I also can't wait to see what you write about T.K. and Matt
Aster Selene chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
I imagine Ken would be more despondent over "causing" Osamu's death...
90MLLu chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
Oh this drabble is very emotional and sweet. I simply love the last line “I know, sweetie. I know.”. That was really haertbreaking. Great job.

God to have you back (v) Looking forward to read your complete story
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