Reviews for Our Love Is A Battle Field
pokemonaline chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
I think it was awsome plus I like that you put suspence at the end.
Belle Jones chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
RedHoodLover chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Poor May. I like what you put in with Dawn.
"Paul for like five days." Sounded hilarious to me.
Hana chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Don't stop! It's a cool story!
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Intersting start. I hope you update soon!
AsnLoserFTW chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Mor3 ch4pt3ers pl3ase
UmbreonMak chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I like this fic so far it has a good beginning I hope u update it!
kiki chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
loved it please update this is such a cliff hanger
hanalarene chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
his girlfriend sure as hell cant possibly be... brianna?
xFlipJamsx chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
please update the story. i really want to know what happens.
Banya chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I love this!Update more before i die ! XD Please?
xbrainlessxxwriterx chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
does drew really have a girlfriend? please update soon!
Wolfxo88 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
does drew really have a girlfriend? i wonder who it is? please update soon. i'm itching to read the next chapter
bluepwnguins chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Totally cute and suspensful at the end! Great job, update!
Solent chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
This is a really cool start, I'd be interested to read more of this. Unfortunately I stopped watching Pokémon properly after Johto series, so I can't comment on how in character everyone is, but it seemed pretty natural overall. There are a few typos here and there, you might want to get a BetaReader to proof-read your work (or if you send me a Private Message I'm sure we could work something out). Please continue this!

Oh, and as a side note, please don't write for reviews; write for the love of writing! Write the stories you enjoy, I'll review anything new you put up. ;)

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