Reviews for The Raven Chronicles, Year One: Exordium
Kari Suttle chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
YES i've ALWAYS wanted to have a glimpse into what those five years were like! You write Raven pretty well, so far. He seemed to only ever talk to Dan Flyheight, and was silent the rest of the time. He seemed obedient enought, too. Anyways, i can't wait to see where you take this fanfic. I've seen one fanfic - no, wait, two actually - where the catalyst for his turning into a monster is his being beaten and abused, but i'm interested for your take on it. In my opinion, raven seems to be a bit too egotistical and arrogant for that to be the case completely, but i dunno. I really hope that you continue writing this fic, cause there truly aren't enough of its type out there. And to answer your question, Karl is a major. If you want to check for yourself, just watch Zoids Chaotic Century episode 13. Around four or five minutes in he's referred to as a major. I just watched it earlier. D
Myama chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I really feel sorry for what sucefio a raven but once I was called joyce lei, really. I think that was exactly the goal of Proz make it a perfect weapon and completely loyal to him compared to a dog is agree on this point. Think you could create random chapters on the life of Raven in the hands of Proz and how it showed him total loyalty. I think the animosity or rivalry between van and Raven is because the van was a zoid pilot Beun without prior training, which would break their Belief of being the perfect weapon, the best zoid pilot tiens ... if not love, tenderness , sinifique something for someone beyond a weapon, something that really is not their own ... and hate the person that takes away the only thing that is yours ... what is your purpose in the life ... when the fact that they posed a threat to their future and in addition also had a feud organoid formed as if ... Please create other chapters
LuminiaAravis chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Was it good? Was it decent? Was it so horrible that it made you want to lock yourself in a bathroom and dunk your head in the toilet? No, try hacking awesome!

Haircuts really get to me. I know his lovely, beautiful hair will grow back, but that was just cruel on Prozen's part. It's a sign of his dominance. And you said Raven had sort of a girly haircut, right? Isn't cutting a woman's hair against her will a sign of disrespect? That's nasty.

And at this point, Karl may or may not be a major. I have no hacking idea. Maybe a Captain...?

Hungry for moar! Feed us, precious!
ShadowRebirth37 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
I liked it! A couple of my fics deal with Raven's time under Prozen. But this was a great start! I hope you continue soon! Update and continue please!

Ibeyla
ITman496 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
I really liked it so far! I can't wait till he meets shadow! Please continue it! D